AlecS's Compliments

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Last Compliment: 7/19/2017

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  • What's a World Without War?
    Well, that was a pretty cool story and who is to say this kind of covert metaphy ...
  • Illusion of an Evolution
    Whoa, sounds like someone is a rebel from the sisterhood...and that's all I'm go ...
  • Thinning the Herd
    Right, I will admit, the twist did catch me out, so points for that; even though ...
  • Monday Moon
    I'm not saying this story doesn't cover a twenty four hour period because I thin ...
  • Peaceful atom
    Right, not that I'm against experimentation with form etc but where are the spee ...
  • Closure
    Okay, it's well written and easy to follow, there a couple of typos but nothing ...
  • Into the Forest
    This is piece I really enjoyed once I slowed my usual frenetic reading pace beca ...
  • The Spider and The Fly
    You know that adult 'Jackanory' they brought out; I could see this as a great fi ...
  • Honey
    Erm...I'm with Lily.  Up to a point I was going along happily with the gentle fl ...
  • It started with a kiss
    The male libido, pathetic isn't it?  '...little sisters' heart.' Unless he's hoo ...
  • The Man Who Wasn't Jake
    Belting last line, Rik, I was ready to cry typo when you pulled the rug.  Now, I ...
  • The Compellor Complex
    I found this a difficult and compelling read; really had to switch on for this o ...
  • The Falling Man
    I have no doubt you are correct, Rik, my grasp, and application, of the rules of ...
  • The Falling Man
    This is a great little tale, maybe a bit dialogue heavy but fascinating nonethel ...
  • Good Evening
    Crackin' read, SC, really enjoyed the reading of this tale of derring-do.  Does ...
  • The  Mouse Princess
    A sweet 'tail', mate, not sure it fits with the brief though.  I am a bitter, tw ...
  • The Parore
    Petty point but I'm going to put it up here because I'm petty...a lot of wharf p ...
  • Holiday Justice
    Just popped by to make falsehoods about Rob's not cheating, I will pursue that i ...
  • The Shelf
    This is very poetic and full of great imagery but it left me kinda feeling: 'Oh, ...
  • Reap of Sowing
    I'm going to have to think on this one Anthony, I quite like the story but again ...
  • From Ghoulies and Ghosties...
    Typo or my bad reading?  'I peered out the windows as closed them hastily.'
  • This Christmas
    Nice one, Anthony, a story with a 'Christmas Carol' feel to it; visiting ghosts ...
  • Marauding Gangs of Children Doing Bad
    The 'reason and rhyme' I need to pay a little more attention to get, that's what ...
  • Limbo
    I quite like the atmosphere you've created here and the mystery behind it.  Havi ...
  • Nietzsche's Baby
    A nice slice of something but I'm not sure it's enough of a slice to satisfy...m ...
  • Shipshape
    I kinda like the quirky-ness of this but it does feel like a lot has been cramme ...
  • Caverns of the Night
    Old school punctuation...if the full stop is outside the speech marks, why not t ...
  • Captain Who?
    Just skipping about and I came back here, Rik, to discover I am an arsehole that ...
  • Breathe Deep
    A mash-up of The Pilgrim Fathers and Ancient Astronauts, is what comes to mind h ...
  • Captain Who?
    So, reading your comment, this is a second story I am commenting on; shame, I wo ...
  • Day Seven
    First off, Rik, I like this; t'was an enjoyable read...the word count I'm sure k ...
  • Mohammad Husayn's Sufferings
    This was fun and I read it with a kinked smile on my gob but then you hit me wit ...
  • Washer meets Dryer
    I get the feeling you may have had some recent problems with laundry and this is ...
  • Comet the End
    Pretty cool, an extinction event coming to a planet near you soon and it's been ...

  • Hi Tom,  So I've read your bio and considering your long military service what I ...
  • My Colorful Life
    I will be bold here and say this is not Bizarro, as it lacks the elements to be ...
  • In the Flames of the Night
    That was fun, I really enjoyed the read in a stylised tone that appealed.  And n ...
  • DEAD CATS
    You're asking us to stay tuned and yet it appears you've gone off the dial...I l ...
  • DEAD CATS
    I think it's a literary tantrum, RJ.
  • x
    I'm sorry, icon, what did you say? I wasn't listening.  Never seen 'Once Upon a ...
  • The Least Fictional Thing
    Funny stuff, mate.  Did you have the punchline before you started writing?  I on ...
  • The Truth
    Augmented.
  • Space Robot Five
    Thought-provoking.
  • The Lone Ranger and Tonto in: Bad Men
    Dodgy.
  • A Long Drop and a Sudden Stop
    I'm confused, girlbird, or maybe stupid.  Are they running from the start and sp ...
  • The Last Train
    Typos?  '...the sound of thoushand of cigarettes.'  '...and shhok out a smoke,' ...
  • In Case of Emergency
    REM?
  • Query Letter
    RJ, is right, get it written first because the synopsis you have supplied here c ...
  • Through the Window
    The Finnmeister returns...and this time he's rhyming.  Good title for a film, wh ...
  • Recess Lessons
    I'm going out on a limb here, RB, hey, I like to live dangerously but I have bee ...
  • I will forever regret
    I'm taking a punt with this but I am assuming this is a true story.  A sad tale, ...
  • My Affliction
    Trimmed and improved I see, well done young lady.  (I'm trying out patronising a ...
  • My Affliction
    You could lose the 'Yeah' to compensate.
  • The Hook
    First person, Ken?
  • Despair
    It's unlikely to be good insight, could be that I can't think of anything so I'm ...
  • Voyage's End
    I quite enjoyed this but I really want to read what happens after this, when the ...
  • All Fools' Day
    Good story with an appealing cast and obviously it seems to be leading to somewh ...
  • A Friend Like No Other
    Sue, you must be getting sick of the sycophantic praise by now so I'm going to c ...
  • Walls
    This is well beyond my ken, my friend, not got a clue.  This leapt out and grabb ...
  • That's Stupid
    In fear of insulting my American friends on this site can I ask a question?  Is ...
  • Word Warrior on a Deadline (Revised)
    I'm not a poet And I sure do know it If I'm asked for stanza I'll fail misera ...
  • A Boy, Waiting
    a well crafted piece of descriptive work that could well have gone over the edge ...
  • Fragile Sanity
    Hi Will, so this really begs the question, how do you sleep at night?  I have ...
  • Ode to my step-father
    A poem of 'reality' that is not too sentimental and still gets across the idea t ...
  • Survival 101
    Hi Will, how's things my friend?  So it's that time again, when I try to sound ...
  • Illusions
    Hi NJ,  Let's start with the important stuff - though I can't find the word, t ...