AlinaVoyce's Compliments

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Last Compliment: 10/27/2017

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  • Mental Klinikiphobia
    I've read this through a couple of times now, and really enjoyed it. The first r ...
  • Anterograde
    Whoa... Seriously good, Duncan. The sense of terror is thick, rich, and dark. A ...
  • Autophobia
    Loved this, Tony, but then, I always like your songs/poems. And, of course, I'll ...
  • The Spoon Prince
    First off, I really liked the explanation of how The Spoon Prince got his name! ...
  • Not Safe For Wayfarers
    Simply brilliant. Love and Sci-fi --a pretty perfect combo in my eyes! :)  A few ...
  • Crabbels the Rabbit, also featuring Lexey Foxx in:  Bucket of Trouble
    Really enjoyed this, Chris (read it through last night and this morning). It's l ...
  • Delicious - Revised
    Hmm... I liked this, but... I found the bit about the bronze confusing, and coul ...
  • Group Therapy
    Really liked this, Chris. I read it through several times whilst I was away, and ...
  • It is a bloke's life.
    I read this through a couple of times, and have to say that although this sub cl ...
  • The Party
    Three for the price of one? Each of these vignettes is beautifully crafted.  You ...
  • Japara; a modern myth. (v 2)
    A well-paced story, Satyr, and I particularly loved the ending, with each spirit ...
  • ...Written by the Victors
    Brilliant. Strangely, I did wonder (almost immediately) if this was going to be ...
  • Stephanie the New Accountant (Song Link at end of song)
    Sat and listened to this song with a huge smile on my face! I confess that I was ...
  • The road to Rasoul (version 2)
    I like this better as an interaction between just two people, but there's still ...
  • The road to Rasoul
    Hmm... Not sure how I feel about this at the moment. After the first read-throug ...
  • Yours Truly, A Rewriter
    Loved this, and it made me laugh!  I empathised with the narrator from start to ...
  • x
    This story really drew me in, and I could feel the waves of emotion coming off t ...
  • Where am I?
    I really liked this. The rhythm is great, and knowing you write songs, I could a ...
  • A Paranoid Pair
    Too late for my feedback to help - which isn't a problem, as I really just wante ...
  • A Yarn of Confessions - Revised Aug 20
    I agree that naming the commandments would add clarity and that cutting the red- ...
  • The Last Train
    This is beautifully written, and I slipped into the setting as if I was sitting ...
  • It's a Sin To Kill
    Glad the comments were of help, Tony. Would love to know what you think of my su ...
  • I Am My Father's Daughter (Revised)
    Hmm.  First off:  I like this idea.  But, like Alec, there's just something not ...
  • The Pact
    Clever, and I always get the feeling that every bit of legislation you've used i ...
  • Just Outside the Window
    Okay, first things first:  I'm rubbish at poetry (as I'm sure I shall soon illus ...
  • And then there was Schrödinger
    As I already mentioned, this was my favourite out of your two subs, to the point ...
  • Timothy took his time to school
    Bloody brilliant, Neil!  Loved the obsessive clock collecting, the description o ...
  • ONE
    Yay, I got back to this!  :)  Nothing much that I picked up on to 'fix' in the r ...
  • The Butchers Son
    Congratulations on being in the top six, Ken - well deserved!  :)
  • x
    I read this through several times to myself, and once to my husband, and I think ...
  • Mud
    This is stunning.  You put me right there, and held me to the end - and the writ ...
  • The Butchers Son
    A beautifully realised tale that is spot-on for the challenge and sent a shiver ...
  • x
    LOL. Rather different - and I liked that.  True, it could do with a little smoot ...
  • Left on Main
    Congratulations on making the leader-board yet again with this sub, Duncan.  As ...
  • Slenderella
    So... Cinderella finally snapped, did she?  Over her crystal shoes, no less!  Ex ...
  • Jessie's Smile
    I really like this, JP.  It flows smoothly, and I can picture the scenes you pai ...
  • Choice
    Dexter... Do you think, maybe, next month you could have a go at writing somethi ...
  • Ultimate Freedom (revised 7/29/14)
    Firstly, I really enjoyed how you gave and insight into the nerves of the speake ...
  • A Dreamer's Summit
    Really enjoyed this, Mellony.  And yeah, sentimentalist that I am, I got a littl ...
  • The Love Of His Life
    First off: I really enjoyed this.  You give an excellent portrayal of an unhinge ...
  • Taste My Fist, Wizard
    I enjoyed this!  Very different, and I liked that it was from the POV of the wit ...
  • Under the rainbow
    Wow!  This is brilliant - and the itch thing made me laugh out loud!  I actually ...
  • Training
    Ticked off a bit because my original feedback wouldn't post and has now disappea ...
  • Under the influence
    Yes!  Wow, Duncan... I love sci-fi (mainly because of the infinite possibilities ...
  • The Door
    Whoa... This is a brilliant sub, Wendy - it sends shivers down the spine!  :)  N ...
  • Entrance to the Song
    This is a beautiful story and you transported me into it completely.  Your descr ...
  • Mortified
    Ha!  Yeah... hate to say it, but I've 'been there' too!  Luckily, a friend let m ...
  • Good Guy with a Few Bad Habits
    Definitely needed to listen to this!  Thanks for the link, Tony.  Not a full bel ...
  • As Luck Would Have It
    Lol - this is my second or third read-through of this sub, and each time I've lo ...
  • Family Breakfast
    I liked how this entire family managed to turn complete 'balderdash' into an app ...
  • Half-life of the Heart
    This ticked the 'women's history month' box as well as including the five words ...
  • A thoroughly nice chap
    Very, very good, RJ. Subtle to the last paragraph - and then the bomb dropped! ...
  • The Hardest Task
    Really enjoyed this, and other than the typo below, there wasn't anything I coul ...
  • It's What's on the Inside That Counts
    Very different and a great way to pay tribute to the designer of the lunar landi ...
  • Blue Rose/Red Rose
    Firstly - can I apologise in advance?  Anyone who's read my own appalling poetry ...
  • The Long Yesterday (Revised)
    Excellent and very moving.  As others have said, I think there are things in thi ...
  • Re-re-rewind
    Thank you!  Last bit of WEbooking before I turn off my computer, and you had me ...
  • Sugarplum Fairies
    Loved this sub.  The characterisation and scene setting was natural and believab ...
  • London Nativity (A Love Story for Christmas)
    Hmm... well, this was well written and fast paced, and the colloquial, phonetic ...
  • A Town of a Thousand Names
    You've left me speechless with this, Aftab.  So very clever and, as usual, beaut ...
  • How we became Gods
    I'm not sure that I should say that I 'enjoyed' this - it's a harrowing tale, an ...
  • How to build a castle in seven easy steps
    Ah, Yes!  Thanks Ernest.  Dan Brown - I got Brown, but I wasn't thinking of auth ...
  • Bleeding Souls
    Oooh, CLEVER that,using another creation of 'The Bard' to feed off the original ...
  • Generation Gap
    Still loving this sub, and I've read it four times now... My one and only constr ...
  • PICA
    Whoa.  This is super creepy!  Nothing I can really add to the feedback already g ...
  • * Poveglia Island *
    Just another thought - the phrase 'Let's go' (and possibly 'Let's leave) - Would ...
  • Scorched Earth
    I must have read this five times at least...I keep coming back, reading it throu ...
  • DUDE
    I enjoyed the idea behind this, but like Duncan and Dollys, this didn't hit the ...
  • Prologue-
    His eyes were wide in fear and his consious without thought of fleeing left him ...
  • Trick or Treat
    Actually....just taken a break for tea and had a think about this.  And I've dec ...
  • The "Incident"
    This is a good story and well told.  I did pick up on the odd minor 'nitpick' su ...
  • Illusions
    This story really appealed to me - I didn't have problems with my teeth, but I d ...
  • Elmer
    This is great and it definitely made me smile.  I guessed that 'Elmer' was somet ...
  • Biology
    What's not to like about this?  A gripping piece of horror/sci-fi, an original t ...
  • x
    This is a REALLY good revision.  You've successfully brought a lot more emotion ...
  • First Kiss?
    This was a pleasure to read...and read again.  The wording creates a distinctive ...
  • Act 1 Scene 5
    Considering you didn't know about Casanova, then this has REALLY tied in well wi ...
  • April is the Cruelest Month (A song)
    Not what I expected to find in the challenge - but these song lyrics are lovely ...
  • First Kiss
    Oh, this is great!  You decimated the rose-tinted, romantic memories and went fo ...
  • Act 1 Scene 5
    Well, I'll echo the sentiment below first: Wow!  This was show, not tell, and in ...
  • First Kiss ®
    This had a lovely, gentle tone to it, and the quickly sketched descriptions fit ...
  • Skittle Attack
    Great story - and one that made me smile.  Plenty of scene setting and a real co ...
  • Seductive Song.
    Ha!  Well, I could certainly identify with this sub - my family call me 'side-tr ...
  • HEROIN(E)
    I only meant that the challenge will become less public now that the July challe ...
  • Go Big or Go home
    I love these characters - irreverant and balsy all roled into one and as I think ...
  • x
    All the way through this piece, I felt like I was missing the 'heart' of it.  So ...
  • Disapperance
    I sometimes wonder about the personalities behind the mysterious user names too. ...
  • Lost Soul
    Well written, and a heartbreaking story.  You portrayed the bleak despair and an ...
  • I Just Had To
    I enjoyed reading this - Lovely story!  :)    The typos I picked up are below. ...
  • Of Whispers and Reflections
    This is a very moving piece of writing.  I really felt the anguish of your main ...
  • Aberration
    I think this would work even better from first person POV, but other than that, ...
  • Sharing
    As said already, this is a well written piece and intriguing.  I loved that this ...
  • This Sweet Life
    You know, I read this when you first put it up (only Bob and Lanette had comment ...
  • Resurrection
    Ha!  Well, obviously, the title's great... and I loved the ideas on why WeBook w ...
  • Novel In The Making
    VERY exciting.  Nicely written, Moonstone.
  • Chapter 3
    Well paced.  You're moving the story along nicely, as well as layering up the qu ...
  • Chapter Two
    Well, this was definitely easier to read than the first chapter, but I can see t ...
  • Chapter Twelve: Magic
    Oh yes... more questions.  Looks like whatever the Mother Superior wanted to tel ...
  • Rodina
    Saw you'd entered this from your posting on the forums, so decided to take a loo ...
  • CHAPTER SIX:
    Three children taken - seven needed.  That sounds interesting.  I'm glad that I ...
  • Loving Blood (chapter 3)
    I've given this a 4.  It still held my interest and I would definitely read on, ...
  • Loving Blood  (chapter 2)
    Oops - One more thing...   “I feel great.  When can I go home,”  >> This should ...
  • Firewalkers  (FIRST VERSION)
    I liked this, it's a fascinating idea.  You need to put some work in on it thoug ...
  • 3.   The Universe
    Umm, please excuse my sudden detioration with regard to the English language, bu ...
  • Bonding Over Bovary
    This is very well written romance bgrace.  Like so much of your writing, it's we ...
  • Snapshot Scandal [Chpt 1]
    I've given this a 5 because you kept making me laugh... this story is full of da ...
  • Life
    My Dad (Now in his 70s) once commented that the whole concept of 'too old' was a ...
  • Descent into Darkness  The First Chapter
    Really glad you decided to join this project, my friend...  As you know, I've re ...
  • CHAPTER TWO: ENCOUNTER
    Oooh... so, NOT a vampire, but a Dark Soul and they 'can' drink human blood?  I' ...
  • PROLOGUE
    Just... intriguing...  :)
  • RAHAV - TALES FROM THE LEVANT
    Loved this.  I found the writing smooth to read and the description put me right ...
  • Whiskey
    Funny you should mention the word 'repulsion' Lanette, because when I was trying ...
  • Chapter Twenty Two
    I second what Skyborn said... beautiful.  I just wish Simon could be made to see ...
  • The Prologue of Marge Holmes - Five Page Challenge
    This was a solid 4 for me, right up until the last line...   I'm going to confes ...
  • Which Is A Worse Fate?
    I really like this - it has an almost poetic ring to it and gets the reader to i ...
  • Chapter Fifteen
    Wonderful chapter... I love the tension that wraps its way around your MCs.  The ...
  • Chapter Fourteen:
    Can't believe I missed this!!!  Came on WEbook to see if you'd written more and ...
  • Chapter Thirteen
    So far so good... but Ivor has to learn to be a little more 'flowery' when talki ...
  • Chapter Twelve:
    And FINALLY the penny drops!!  Of course Silva wouldn't attack you - you idiot! ...
  • 27. Wings
    So... Emma doesn't have wings?  Her body rejected them?  I hope she can save Ben ...
  • Chapter Ten:
    Oh Ivor... how could you do this to her?  This is going to take a LOT of fixing. ...
  • Chapter Seven:
    I'm with Skyborn - this story makes me nervous... And at the moment, because he ...
  • Chapter Six:
    The tension is really escalating now... This is turning into Romeo and Juliet - ...
  • Chapter Four
    OOh... there may be trouble ahead!!  If Silva finds Ivor attractive and Les has ...
  • Chapter Three
    What can I say?  This is so well written - you have my attention and you are kee ...
  • 19. Caught
    Brilliant - Emma's using fighting talk here!  Go girl!  Elizabeth is a nasty pie ...
  • Chapter Twenty One: EPITATH
    BTW - Loved the last line 'Take me home Kellen.'  Simple, but perfect!  :)
  • Chapter Nineteen: The World as She knows it has Vanished
    This just makes me want to cry - at this point Renaldo has won... Poor Kellen an ...
  • The Rain
    This is short and beautiful.  It especially calls to me as a resident of rainy E ...
  • 26. Enquiries
    This was a great chapter - very smooth dialogue.  I really want Toby to find out ...
  • 11. Truth
    This chapter is one of my favourites - you've packed such a lot of info into it! ...
  • 8. Confusion
    Oh, nearly forgot - is that a touch of the green eyed monster coming from Morgan ...
  • Chapter Eighteen
    Oooh!! I knew Sutoo was going to pull something like this!  Come on Alex (or Ze' ...
  • 5. Class
    General: This chapter had a lot going on in it 'below' the surface.  Kyle is int ...
  • 2. Piano
    Right, having read your note at the bottom of this page, I've thrown away the no ...
  • Chapter Eleven:
    BAD native - DO NOT mess with Alex's woman!!  :)
  • Chapter Three
    Oooh.... the plot thickens... I have my theories, of course, but I think I'll ke ...
  • Peanuts and Cracker Jack
    Excellent!! :)  Like Mavmanc, I haven't a clue what all that was about (as a Bri ...
  • Chapter Nine
    Started to read this, but couldn't keep my eyes open... Nothing to do with your ...
  • 1. Tutor
    This is keeping my attention and you have already managed to get me 'caring' abo ...
  • Chapter 11
    I'm so relieved that Beth has given up the whoe 'vendetta' thing against Creeper ...
  • Chapter Sixteen: She has Concerns
    Ok - that's me in floods of tears!  This situation is beyond horrible.... but yo ...
  • I taste you
    Just loved this - you have a real talent for creating emotion and images through ...
  • Chapter Fourteen: She goes Home
    This is getting extremely complicated - Kellen must be nearly going out of his m ...
  • Chapter 9
    Blind?  No, I think not, there is something VERY odd going on here.  The optomet ...
  • Chapter 5
    Tommy has a Russian half-brother?! LOL, ROFL... That was great! :)  That noteboo ...
  • Chapter 14
    Oh, almost forgot - I've got a VERY bad feeling about Creeper's car not being th ...
  • Chapter 13
    Wow - I was right there with Beth and Lizzy.  You described Robert's snowboardin ...
  • Chapter 11
    Fantastic chapter and I still love Tommy's character - speaking of which... what ...
  • Chapter 7
    Right, first things first - I've been reading the previous feedback.  I know wha ...
  • Chapter 4
    Ah, Beth.... SO funny - love really does make fools of us - I'm sure it's becaus ...
  • Chapter 1
    This really is wonderful - Your characters have grabbed my interest and held it. ...
  • Chapter Eleven: Knowledge
    WOW - this is DEFINITELY the best chapter so far - your writing is smooth and fl ...
  • Chapter Five: Journey
    Good chapter!!!  More questions for you to answer though.... a complete lack of ...
  • Chapter Fifteen
    Uh oh - the family are coming, right?  ALL of them!!!  And if Ira could swing it ...
  • Chapter Two: Damian
    Nice scene setting and beautiful descriptive passages, as usual with your writin ...
  • Chapter Thirteen
    Well, you may think it needs something - but I can't see what?  Still, I wouldn' ...
  • Dreams, Copley chapter
    That's the spirit Mia!  Don't like the sound of this though... I thought Sam's p ...
  • Dreams, Chapter 12
    Wonderful! Lots going on in this chapter - I'm intrigued by the mystery surround ...
  • 3. Chapter 3
    This chapter has a fast pace and plenty going on.  The new characters are a bit ...
  • 8. Chapter Four: The Roof
    Story moving along nicely - I found the writing to be very smooth and consequent ...
  • Chapter Three: Suspect
    Excellent - some typos, but I know all about THOSE.  They tend to slip in when y ...
  • Chapter Four: Thirst
    Yes, enjoying this immensely - will be back to read more soon!
  • Chapter One: Homecoming
    Intriguing plot - lots going on and although I am finding all the characters and ...
  • 4. The Blackout (Part 2)
    One of the best lines I've read, so far, is  -  The door began to open and light ...
  • Chapter Nine
    Still keeping my attention!  Now awaiting next chapter....
  • Silenced
    Really enjoyed this.  Love your style of writing and will definitely be reading ...