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  • Someone shoot Tennyson
    I really liked this, Kity. But then, I like reading stories that explore the ran ...
  • Hmm...
    Apologies!!! That was an error of MINE--it should have read 'Love takes a little ...
  • Crystal
    A pair of Femme Fatales! This was good fun, Tony, and Gaius was sleezy enough th ...
  • Alice and Freda (1890s/Based on True Story)
    Wow. That's quite a story (and one I think I'll look up).   Below are one or two ...
  • Hmm...
    I liked this story, and although it took me a moment to get the switch to figura ...
  • A Reality I'd Rather Forget
    This story has a lot of potential, but I agree with the previous feedback--the l ...
  • An Evening Affair
    A lovely story, which brought back fond memories of my own children's toy tea-pa ...
  • Seder
    This story is positively soaked in what I can only describe as 'an air of quiet ...
  • Tasty Morsels
    I rather liked this, and was fooled by 'Harry', too.   After the 'I certainly wo ...
  • Group Therapy
    Just relieved that I can still 'copy and paste' on my phone! Saves me squinting ...
  • The Invite
    Glancing down the feedback below, I see that you've already received some excell ...
  • A Hot Time in The Ole Town, Tonight
    I enjoyed this story and found the notes interesting. The story came across as a ...
  • Special
    I really enjoyed this.   Critique wise, the only thing that jumped out at me was ...
  • The Rising
    A few typos, and I agree with Shana about the second paragraph. The sentence sta ...
  • Hex Nihilo
    This is excellent. Granted, I admire your writing, but this goes beyond that. Te ...
  • Frankenstein Immortal (fragment)
    This reads smoother now - although I feel a little thick not getting the 'meet' ...
  • The Vinaigrette Vignette
    As Alec has already said: it's 'Good fun', Chris. It's the kind of out-the-box p ...
  • Granada
    Lovely. I've never been to Granada--but you took me there. You made me care for ...
  • All That Glitters
    I loved this new telling of a well known piece of folk-lore.   Just one thing I ...
  • Solstice
    Interesting story, and I can see how it would be easy to expand it (if that's wh ...
  • The Virgin's Story - Revision 2
    Interesting re-telling, Tony. Putting aside any debate about religion and folklo ...
  • Blue Connections
    Oh, very clever! ALL the characters, and you even combined two into one. I liked ...
  • Chapter 1 - Fear of Home
    Hi blobbyboy - I'll say straight off that (if you want me to) I intend coming ba ...
  • Evil Clouds - Revised 1
    You've been given some great feedback below, to which I can't really add much. ...
  • For the Man Who Has Everything
    Brilliant.  I read this through twice... once to myself and once aloud to the fa ...
  • Stalingrad
    I really liked this. And you surprised me, Chris, because when it started, I rea ...
  • Party On
    You've obviously changed this quite a bit, looking at the feedback below.  Whate ...
  • Relevance
    The dog DIED?!!  Chris... how could you?  Really enjoyed this sub. I thought the ...
  • Brown Bread
    Yup, I think you've smoothed this out beautifully. My only critiques this time a ...
  • One Beyond Doubt
    Wow, cracking story. One of those occasions when I really wish the word count wa ...
  • The Bartender
    AMENDMENT to below:  With regard to question/exclamation marks at the end of dia ...
  • The Bartender
    I don't generally like 'rules' but I understand common sense. So, when people st ...
  • The Bartender
    Nicely told story, Kristy.  And there was a subtle change to the meaning of the ...
  • Blue
    This sub seemed to speed up just as you said life does. Not sure if it was becau ...
  • Snowflake
    The actress Helena Bonham Carter once said that she tended to 'overdress', so wh ...
  • The Chest
    I've read this through a few times and I'm incredibly impressed at the depth of ...
  • Palindrome
    An intriguing story, Neil, and the palindrome angle is clever.  Possible typos e ...
  • Marmaduke
    Glad to see you back on the challenges, Dollys!  Reading this through, the main ...
  • Let Me Count the Ways
    Really liked this.  You've created a setting, scenario and characters that are e ...
  • Case Closed!
    Great atmosphere and characters, and I liked how one part of Pony's tale came fu ...
  • I'm Not Crazy
    Really enjoyed this, Jed. Funny and easy to visualise... garden ornament mayhem! ...
  • Monopoly
    This sub gripped me from start to finish AND kept me guessing as to what was/was ...
  • The Cave Doctor
    Sorry I got to this so late, Bob.  I agree with the feedback left already; this ...
  • Patuxet
    This is well written, and a subtle twist.  The sort of story that bears a re-rea ...
  • Never Look Back
    Very good, and very dark.  A difficult read.  The syrup description of blood had ...
  • Click! (Reviewed)
    Thoroughly enjoyed this!  And really, there's nothing that jumps out at me as ne ...
  • All in a Day's Work
    Really liked this, girlbird.  Great action and I could visualise it all easily. ...
  • Inner Demons
    Okay, how the heck do you manage it, Duncan?  I'm in complete awe of how your br ...
  • Over the Trope
    Oh, I LOVED this, Duncan!  So funny...  One tiny nitpick:  So you want me to tak ...
  • Bomaru's Quest, Part IV
    Great writing, and I love the angle of characters taking on a life of their own ...
  • It's a Sin To Kill
    I thought that the MC was Scout?  (because you say 'I asked him' and then Atticu ...
  • A Teacher's View
    Really enjoyed this. Fake beauty v natural beauty, with so many great visuals. T ...
  • The World (an autistic view)
    I liked this, except for one thing.  Every time I read:  I stare at the window, ...
  • First Kiss
    Very good!  I enjoyed this.    One or two typos and possible sentence structure ...
  • And then there was Schrödinger
    Brilliant.  I like your first sub, but this is even better.  It grabbed my atten ...
  • Just One More Time
    I don't really care if this sub is about a vampire or a delusional serial killer ...
  • Chapter 4 (revised)
    Okay, I am officially hooked by this story - so, any chance of more chapters?  O ...
  • Chapter 3 (revised)
    Lovely.  You had me completely hooked, and Sarah Hudson's declaration is particu ...
  • Chapter 2 (revised)
    Morning sunlight through the window licked my face, warm as a puppy. >> now that ...
  • Gimme Shelter
    Brilliant sub - great to see you on the top six leader-board!  :)
  • Small Miracles
    Okay... as a mark of just how good this sub is, I came back for another read thr ...
  • Lydia Moss and the League of Shadows
    As others have mentioned below, I'm pretty sure this story isn't aimed at 'me'. ...
  • Boots of Spanish Leather
    This is clever, Kristy!  And despite the words of the letters, the most telling ...
  • The Party
    I meant to say:  After reading Neil's feedback below, I re-read this.  My interp ...
  • The Party
    Really liked this, Jesk - it's unusual and entertaining!   I did have a few paus ...
  • Gimme Shelter
    I still love this sub, and I've read it a few times now. I just can't find anyth ...
  • Gimme Shelter
    Well, I think Duncan said it: Wow. This is an excellent sub, Ken. You grabbed my ...
  • Snow White and Dunkel
    This sub morphed quickly from the expected to the unexpected. I didn't see the t ...
  • Elegie
    Beautifully written, Duncan and I loved how you showed the indecision, the depth ...
  • Death's Messengers
    Nicely done, Duncan.  And nice to read a story that, although sad, isn't SO dark ...
  • The Door Of Possibilities
    Okay, here they are:  the likes of which you had never seen!" >> have never seen ...
  • The Door Of Possibilities
    Really enjoyed this, Kristy.  Much more 'real' than the fairytale. Looks like au ...
  • Snow White
    This is HORRIBLE, Aftab (which is actually a compliment for this month's challen ...
  • The Apple (Draft 2)
    Jack, this has a great 'gritty' feel to the writing and the urban poverty comes ...
  • "Urban Paradise"
    I rather liked this! There were a couple of places where I thought you could smo ...
  • Shenanigans
    Hmm... I've read this through three times now and tried hard to think how to wor ...
  • I am
    Very nice.  I liked the tone, and the ebb and flow of the words.  I've never con ...
  • The lion's roar
    Just one pause point: There for, to do not be rude >> Therefore, to not be rude
  • Adulthood is Overrated
    This is great, Jesk!  Loved it, loved it, loved it, and felt like applauding mys ...
  • A Passing (Revised)
    Wow. I've been away with the family, so this is the first time I've read this. S ...
  • Training
    Oh, almost forgot!    The repitition >> repetition
  • A Rather Curious Garden
    Hmm... getting sight and sound from this piece.  I'll have to come back and read ...
  • Longing
    Lovely story, Megan.  I have one or two questions, but I'll message you with tho ...
  • The Door
    Beautifully written, right down to the smell of the moss and bark but... I feel ...
  • Circe
    Wow... very Wizard of Oz-like!  This had the feel of a nightmare, which I kind o ...
  • The Little Things
    As omentoo has already said, the structure of this was simplistic but no less ef ...
  • When A Gun Isn't A Gun
    Really enjoyed this, Jesk!  I love hearing tales of family pranks and you've enr ...
  • When Boots Are Too Big
    Overall, I liked this - and as Alex has already pointed out, I know a few people ...
  • The Mutaka
    Lol - nasty, bugs!  This is why I try not to go anywhere near places that have b ...
  • Identity In Crisis
    Yeah... That made me laugh!  I'd lose the 'Shine' too though. Maybe finish with ...
  • It's All in the Details
    I really enjoyed this sub and I thought you included the five words well.  I did ...
  • Love, Lust, and Padded Bras
    Aww... now that was lovely, Adam!  I wouldn't have put you down as a romance wri ...
  • A Falsie in a Cafe
    I really liked this, Jesk, and I applaud how you've used the word 'falsie' in su ...
  • Tell es-Sultan
    Oh, I love this story! Like revisiting a dream, V, and just as well written as I ...
  • The Super-Secret Misadventures of Agent Dareo Hithun
    No mystery, but a definite end to the story and you made me smile.  I liked this ...
  • The Super-Secret Misadventures of Agent Dareo Hithun
    I was somewhat torn after reading this - on the one hand, I thought the writing ...
  • A Steady Hand
    This was so sad... and I would like for someone to save her too!  :(  Couple of ...
  • An Unsuprisingly Suprising Change to Life
    Oh, meant to say - the title - shouldn't that be 'An' Unsurprisingly Surprising ...
  • An Unsuprisingly Suprising Change to Life
    Very funny, and I read the entire thing with a kind of 'Peter Jones' voice runni ...
  • 28
    This was well thought out and a great response to the challenge.  Really loved h ...
  • Grievance
    YES!!  Throughout this piece, I was slowly sliding towards 'miserable' and think ...
  • Aerial Clash
    Really liked this - a lesson in how to write an action scene and keep the reader ...
  • Asha
    Really liked this.  There's just something about the wording that pulled me in. ...
  • Stanley the Gentleman (Revised)
    Lovely sub - reading Duncan's feedback, I agree that you could dispense with the ...
  • Love In The Snow
    She has silver hair, purple eyes and pale white skin. >> She had silver hair (pa ...
  • One Hundred
    Horrible, but well written.  The abuse, physical and psychological is truly horr ...
  • Jumper
    I liked this.  You got the emotion over to the reader well, and as a result ther ...
  • Angel of Death
    Re my suggestion below: (I wiped my eyes and looked >> I remembered how I'd wipe ...
  • Angel of Death
    Read this a week ago, but didn't have the time to comment.  You've been given so ...
  • Last Words.
    Very nicely done.  I love the variety of submissions this challenge is already o ...
  • Space Robot Five
    I thought it had to be about Februrary too - but part of me wanted to write some ...
  • Eloise
    Really liked this, especially as it appears to be another snippet from your 'Sal ...
  • For War
    Really enjoyed this very strong character piece.  Frankie had me by her side all ...
  • Chapter 3
    Right, this was a great chapter - loved it!  Yes, as usual I had some 'suggestio ...
  • Chapter 1
    Okay, this is a GOOD chapter.  A few places where I think the wording could be m ...
  • Everything Is Going To Be Alright
    This is well written, entertaining and funny.    Only picked up on a couple of t ...
  • Sam's Letter to Jim
    A very emotive sub.  I'm guessing that these are characters from one of your boo ...
  • Mother (Revised)
    Wow... like an anti-Mary Poppins!  Very imaginative and a fascinating read.  Str ...
  • A miraculous birth
    Well, having read the two pieces, I have to say that I agree with Aftab.  This i ...
  • A Charming Tale
    Unusual take on the challenge and some interesting and imaginative plot twists a ...
  • London Nativity (A Love Story for Christmas)
    Ah... nice to know how this story evolved!    What about changing your bad guy t ...
  • No Room at the Inn
    A really beautiful story, RJ.  I should have known you'd pull something like thi ...
  • A Silent Night
    Forget my head if it was loose!  Just one suggestion: His breathing stopped. >> ...
  • The Crowning
    I enjoyed this.  I liked the modern-day setting and I also liked that this was f ...
  • The Crowning
    On my lunch break, so I'll come back to read this properly when I get home tonig ...
  • The Great Light
    This is a beautiful story and well written, with definite 'voice' behind the wor ...
  • Jesus of America
    I thought this was BRILLIANT!  Loved the concept and the writing flowed and kept ...
  • The Forge of Two Kings
    I didn't have any problem with the railroad angle - and I really enjoyed this! ...
  • Betty Swoop, CST: Transcription 251 - A Different Kind of Affair
    I did enjoy this story, but the structure didn't 'quite' sit right with me.  The ...
  • In which Solomon Fierce receives an offer he can't refuse
    Really liked this!  I've been trying to catch up on some sub reviewing today and ...
  • Judge Eternity (fragment)
    Well, I think you know my thoughts on this already, but just for the WEbook reco ...
  • Chapter 2
    Again, I liked the writing style, but the backwards shift in time threw me and I ...
  • The Adventures of Mr. Pibb
    Ooh, I really, really liked this!  There are so many ways that this could go, an ...
  • Full Circle
    Excellent, Duncan! Reading this, I felt as though I could have cut the tension a ...
  • Moonstruck
    Sorry it took me a while to get to this latest version, tony.    Although there ...
  • Chapter 1
    This is a very short chapter, but it's also a nice set-up for the rest of the st ...
  • Bedroom Eyes
    I read this when you first attempted to post it - and was hoping you'd sort our ...
  • Mother Moon
    I'll be honest.  I'm not entirely sure I 'got' this piece of writing.  You have ...
  • 13
    You really have tightened this up, Tony.  Excellent revision.  Just a few things ...
  • High Moon
    Firstly, this is a very visual and gruesome story that certainly fulfills the 'H ...
  • HOWL
    Horrific and tension filled with good descriptions.  Just a couple of things tha ...
  • Chapter One
    Oops, missed one!  'red vinal booth' >> vinyl
  • Three
    I've read this chapter through a couple of times now.  It's as eloquent as your ...
  • An Eye for a Gangster
    I've read this through a couple of times now and I can already see that you've m ...
  • Last Request
    Right, first off - thoroughly enjoyed this!  You have a great writing style that ...
  • Bully
    I'm going to message you with most of my suggestions/typos, Kenn, but I just wan ...
  • Bully
    Much tighter, Ken.  The story progression is natural and believable.  Just one t ...
  • Anthropology 101
    I really liked this sub.  Not least because I recently had a conversation with a ...
  • Peer pressure
    This was written well and kept me totally on-board with your character from star ...
  • Tater Tot Tuesday
    This is a fascinating read.  One student driven mad and another one fighting to ...
  • A stitch in time
    This short story is thought provoking and contains a whole list of 'stuff' that ...
  • Cool Blue Ion Trails
    Read this as soon as I saw who'd written it.  And yet again, you didn't disappoi ...
  • First Kiss
    Nicely done. Lots of emotion and tension and I liked that you ended with the MC ...
  • Serenity
    This is cleverly done and I enjoyed the way you described your MC's struggle aga ...
  • Venus' First Kiss
    Still loving this sub.  I can really 'see' this couple and the tubes...  Couple ...
  • I See Bluebells
    A great sub - just needs to have those technical issues fixed and it'll be even ...
  • First Kiss
    This is a creepy story and it definitely made me shiver.  They still don’t even ...
  • The embrace.
    There are a lot of grammar and structure issues with this submission, but I stil ...
  • Eternally Yours
    You pulled out all the stops with this sub, Kim!  I'll write my critique when I' ...
  • Perfect First Kiss
    Nicely crafted sub, with strong scene setting and plenty of emotion.  Suggested ...
  • First Kiss
    Wonderful sub, full of energy, and a real sense of childlike abandon and the sim ...
  • The Bumpy Road
    An interesting sub and very on-topic for current events.   I wasn't used to peop ...
  • N/A
    Right, first off, I loved this.  Your descriptions and world building were fanta ...
  • A Small Gesture
    Okay, so these are the lines that I paused at, but can't decide if that's purely ...
  • Hidden Agenda
    I think a little of this story was lost on me because I'm English: I had no clue ...
  • The Games People Play
    LOVED it!!  Really good interpretation of this challenge and sublimely entertain ...
  • From Paris to Strasbourg
    Wow - well, it's evening where I am, and I'm having a break between chapters so ...
  • Necessary evil
    As already said, this is nicely written and you conjured up the characters and s ...
  • Silver Squares
    I liked the style of this, the use of the texting and the way you wrote about th ...
  • Normal Day
    I don't feel as if I can offer any useful comments on this because it's obviousl ...
  • Arnie Plumpton and the Vending Machine Bandit
    Very, very good.  This has some great characterisation and a strong plot.  Nothi ...
  • Say you`ll stay
    This is a lovely story about young love and I enjoyed reading it. Well done.  Ha ...
  • 08: Vincenzo
    This was another very good chapter - you held my attention and I enjoyed it so m ...
  • Escape to Freedom
    Haven't got a clue what's going on here...but then, that's part of the pull to t ...
  • A Little Experiment
    Good story and you held the twist back well.  I thoroughly enjoyed this - There ...
  • Red Purse
    I enjoyed reading this.  I especially liked the description of the purse and the ...
  • CHAPTER 5 - THE RAGE
    Okay, so this was a twist I didn't see coming.  I knew Nat felt stronger, but yo ...
  • *Chapter FOUR*
    Okay, so despite the grand list of stuff below, I really enjoyed this chapter AG ...
  • *Chapter THREE*
    Umm... okay, that was... a tour-de-force of how to write sensual prose - someone ...
  • *Chapter TWO*
    I've given this five stars because you have a real talent for giving your reader ...
  • 05: Susan
    Very good!  :)  The scene setting is great and your chapter progression is good ...
  • 04: Flight
    Okay, so I have to say... I'm not buying this.  You're up to something!  :)  For ...
  • 3: The Great Nero Palace
    Part 4:  Suggested re-words below.  Also, just wondered, do you read what you've ...
  • 3: The Great Nero Palace
    Part 2:  Nothing much to critique on this - very nice world building here too. ...
  • 3: The Great Nero Palace
    Part 1:  As usual, your world building is excellent. My two favourite sections w ...
  • 2: Maximus
    Overall, another fantastic chapter.  Held my attention and again, the descriptio ...
  • 1:  Invitation to Greatness
    Woah.  Right, where to start?  So, obviously this is a well crafted piece of wri ...
  • Me and Not Me
    Love this interpretation of the challenge.    Your scene building is great - Onl ...
  • My Compliments-Symbols.
    I like the compliments option, but haven't really thought about the symbols... u ...
  • Chapter 4
    Another good chapter.  The questions keep stacking up, which is as it should be ...
  • Chapter 3
    Oops, nearly forgot - 'Inside the humongous, students were so engaged...' >> hum ...
  • No. 1
    Hello Lumine... firstly, what a beautiful story idea, you have a style of writin ...
  • TO DANCE WITH THE SATYR
    I've given this a four but it was a hair's breadth from being a 5.  I enjoyed th ...
  • Smaller Than Life (start of Chapter One)
    This is a fascinating beginning.  I like the way that you've written this, as th ...
  • Vow of Silence- First Page Challenge
    I think that this story has a lot of potential - but it also needs work.  This s ...
  • Aylis
    This was possibly the most unorthodox piece of writing I've ever read.  At first ...
  • LIFE STUDIES
    This was intensely moving and harrowing.  That first line set the tone and stopp ...
  • Snapshot Scandal [Chpt 1]
    Meant to add - this could do with a read-through.  I noticed a couple of instanc ...
  • Demons among other things (an untitled work)
    Noticed a few things that needed to be picked up and sorted out, nothing a thoro ...
  • Being Bompsy Carleffa - Ch. 1
    Still really enjoying this - I see that it's a YA story, does that make me 'youn ...
  • The Other One - First Page Challenge
    Really liked this - had a 'deja vu' moment whilst reading it.  I've checked, and ...
  • The Prologue of Marge Holmes - Five Page Challenge with Extended Sample
    This was a game of two halves for me.  I'm starting this review from where the p ...
  • Morgan
    Sorry, just noticed.  It needs to be Sundays, not Sunday's.
  • Cold Christmas
    This is great!  I think the telling section is 'like the surgeon's knife.' rathe ...
  • 28. Savior
    Yey!!  A happy ending!  I LOVE happy endings - but yes, I think you need to do a ...
  • 23. Hot Welcoming
    Firstly, I was relieved that taking Emma's wings out was done with more care tha ...
  • 20. Trial
    Wow - LOVE the fact that the 'no sexual encounters of any kind' rule is accepted ...
  • 18. Scars
    As Crystalna said... Wow!  Again, fantastic chapter - and very, erm, emotional.. ...
  • Day Three
    A good samaritan!  This chapter has just endeared Aiden to me even more! :)  Can ...
  • 13.Test
    Oh... how I HATE Elizabeth!!!  This chapter got me SO angry - I don't think ther ...
  • 6. Earth
    General: I have to admit - I struggle with these headings sometimes - what can I ...
  • First Light
    Very nicely done...
  • 4). Actually Blushing
    Another great chapter.  One or two typing errors (I know all about them - it usu ...
  • Day One
    Overall, a great chapter and VERY atmospheric - there are a number of things tha ...
  • Chapter 10
    I loved this chapter - very glad it was Rob, as expected, on the other side of t ...
  • Chapter 7
    Now... This chapter.  Excellent, as I now expect, and it advanced things at a go ...
  • Chapter 6
    Haven't even had my breakfast! :)  Got up earlier than everyone else in my famil ...
  • 2. Chapter 2
    Another good chapter that continues to move the story along at a good pace.   Pi ...