Ann_Casey's Compliments

Compliments:  44

Last Compliment: 3/31/2011

Brilliant (4)

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  • Introduction: Candice
    Candace scares the crap out of me.  I'm really worried about what she's going to ...
  • CHAPTER ONE (Revised)
    On the plus side, you get quickly into some plot.  Watson is found dead and grue ...
  • Chapter One
    Sorry, I had a lot of trouble following this.  The story kept lurching back and ...
Helpful (17)

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  • Introduction: Candice
    Another issue:  I'm having a hard time believing that Candace is from a ghetto i ...
  • 02. The Significance
    You have some strange developments here.  I have no idea where you're taking thi ...
  • 01. The Dream
    I like how you start in the middle of action.  Nice!  You leave a lot of uncerta ...
In-depth (6)

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Enlightening (5)

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  • PROLOGUE (Revised)
    You asked to be ripped a new one.  Here we go.  You tripped off annoyance with t ...
  • ~ III ~
    What does the narrator do?  You bring up she gets a fairly generous amount of pa ...
  • ~ I ~
    You have an interesting place here to start the story.  Things happen quickly an ...
Motivating (7)

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Unique (5)

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  • 3. The Feast
    Yeah, that's beyond R, more like NC-17.  And rather disturbing.    If the point ...
  • PART I: Chapter Two
    General: More tearing you a new one:  Three sentences in a row beginning with "I ...
  • Part I: Present Day
    General: First off, this is not a prologue.  The whole point of a prologue is to ...