Ann_Casey's Compliments

Compliments:  5

Last Compliment: 3/21/2011

Enlightening (5)

Submission Reviews

  • PROLOGUE (Revised)
    You asked to be ripped a new one.  Here we go.  You tripped off annoyance with t ...
  • ~ III ~
    What does the narrator do?  You bring up she gets a fairly generous amount of pa ...
  • ~ I ~
    You have an interesting place here to start the story.  Things happen quickly an ...
  • Gone in the Morning PROLOGUE
    Nice start.  You get into some nice location, into your protagonist, and into th ...
  • Prologue
    Don't call this a prologue.  This is a chapter.  There's especially no such thin ...