You asked to be ripped a new one. Here we go. You tripped off annoyance with t ...
~ III ~
What does the narrator do? You bring up she gets a fairly generous amount of pa ...
~ I ~
You have an interesting place here to start the story. Things happen quickly an ...
Gone in the Morning PROLOGUE
Nice start. You get into some nice location, into your protagonist, and into th ...
Don't call this a prologue. This is a chapter. There's especially no such thin ...