Ann_Casey's Compliments

Compliments:  17

Last Compliment: 3/31/2011

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  • Introduction: Candice
    Another issue:  I'm having a hard time believing that Candace is from a ghetto i ...
  • 02. The Significance
    You have some strange developments here.  I have no idea where you're taking thi ...
  • 01. The Dream
    I like how you start in the middle of action.  Nice!  You leave a lot of uncerta ...
  • Chapter One
    I'm going to go out in a direction very different from these other reviews.  Not ...
  • Chapter 1
    I like the idea of a civilian being found on a submarine.  There is so much pote ...
  • Chapter 1:The Thief Girl
    You definitely got my interest.  You opened on action and kept it going througho ...
  • Chapter One
    Angels on Earth exterminating humans; wasn't this the premise of a (poorly revie ...
  • ~Chapter 1
    You cover a lot of backstory here, too much really as it overwhelms the "current ...
  • ~Intro
    Not that I have any problem using a chat session in a book, though you might con ...
  • ~Chapter 2
    You start off the chapter with kink.  Great way to get attention.  Bench-style f ...
  • The Unborn~2005
    General: I'm sorry, but the suspension of disbelief is starting to crumble.  Amo ...
  • Chapter 1
    Be careful of little capitalization and punctuation issues.  Personally, reading ...
  • PART I: Chapter Three
    Comments made before on character and dialogue still apply here.  The fight betw ...
  • PART I: Chapter One
    General: More harsh stuff.  Sorry if I tear you a new one.  You drop Ty on the r ...
  • To You, From Me
    Now I'm depressed.  The last paragraph is pretty good.  One problem, though, is ...
  • Chapter 1
    Sorry, but I'm having a problem from the first paragraph.  Isabella Duncan is in ...
  • Dreading Summer
    General: First and most importantly:  I realize most people can't proof their ow ...