Arebella's Compliments

Submission Reviews

• Chapter 4
  
  i love the story so far ! cant wait for more! :)
• 19. Chapter 19- The Plot Behind the Plot
  
  smooth ,Jeremy . Real smooth. i love it . natalie needs to suck it up and get it ...
• 4. Oh-no he didn't!!
  
  that was a funny chapter .
• 20. Chapter 20- The Hill
  
  awwww. no . she cannot have cancer! omg hurry up write more please . i like this ...
• 13. Chapter 13
  
  write more please !!!
• 1. chapter 1
  
  cute and interesting . i like it .
• 15. Reality's a Bitch
  
  holy cow , that info about Ella's dad being the dad of Kara's baby was a hit in ...
• 14. A Beating
  
  that part with Rocco was kinda scary . that's good though . i think Ella will be ...
• 13. Frustration
  
  I like this chapter ! Keep writing , I really want to know what happens between ...
• 12. Harsh Words
  
  whoa . i see ella's rage it gave me chills . toby's return concern and his own r ...
• 10. Autopsy
  
  ahhhhh the plot thickens wahahaha. i like it
• 1. Rocco's Girls
  
  good job you make me want to read more which i will . :)
• 10. Month Five.
  
  awwww!  this is sooo good. keep it up i will definatly keep reading
• 7. C
  
  ooooooo you give me chills which is a good thing . i'm gettign wrapped up in thi ...
• Beauty Is In The Eyes Of The Beholder
  
  wow i like this
• 1. ideas. I will put into better order later.
  
  cool idea
• 2. stop!
  
  very intriguing . i would love to read more you could get very far with this