1. Chapter 1
Do I even need to say anything? This is great.
Changing Of The Guard
I'm not sure what you mean by "lidded eyes." "Just then a voice spoke over a ...
Lol, "O'Hara" brings to mind "Scarlet O'Hara." But seriously, when people say ...
Chapter One: The Carving
I love your diction and composition of detail. I always admire writers who are g ...