BlueFangs's Compliments

Compliments:  6

Last Compliment: 4/20/2013

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Submission Reviews

  • Chapter 1
    I really like where this is going. Although some things are unnecessary to put i ...
  • Chapter Three
    I think you could really make the reader see more of what's going on. Although I ...
  • Chapter One~New Beginnings
    1st Paragraph: "Noelle's light head rested on the soft leather pantened seat of ...
  • Chapter Two~Rough Start
    ha-ha Good thing I know Spanish ^_^    I only saw one mistake but there might be ...
  • Preface - Lottie
    Wow, I could really see everything in my mind, this is really descriptive and I ...
  • 21. Finale
    Pubication would be great ^_^ I would buy it. But you should get as much help/su ...