Cristo's Compliments

Compliments:  12

Last Compliment: 6/18/2017

Brilliant (12)

Submission Reviews

  • Not all There
    The last thing you want is 'feedback' with no value to add to it. So I need to t ...
  • Gammazare's Choice - Prologue (part 1)
    Short, sweet, and exciting. I really like the description, I can imagine him in ...
  • Cutter
    I'm liking Saul's character more and more.  I also enjoyed reading about the ch ...

  • This was good. Yet I have to make the effort to be critical and help you to imp ...
  • Chapter One: Pain and Release
    It's very good. I can imagine what the father and what he looks like. Some of th ...
  • Chapter 1:1 (pp 1-3) *REVISED*
    The only catch I could find was that the chapter ended suddenly, but I don't thi ...
  • 7. Chpt 6
    hmmmmm..... I don't really have any useful comments. Good chapter. I had troubl ...
  • 6. Chpt 5
    I've read books that were just a whole novel of letters/emails etc, not just to ...
  • 5. Chpt 4
    I could be wrong, but at this point I think he's a creep. Its illegal for him to ...
  • Truth or Dare
    That was hilarious. Especially the whole part that involved the garbage bin. Ta ...
  • After Marcus
    I thought it was extremely deep. I was thinking 'wow'. And halfway through, I w ...
  • The Gigantic Gobstopper Mission
    I like this, and its so true. This story makes me remember all those times my br ...