Cristo's Compliments

Compliments:  14

Last Compliment: 8/5/2010

Enlightening (14)

Submission Reviews

  • 2. When We Met
    Wow. It actually got better and better. Okay, how do I give you  feedback, where ...
  • This Isn't The End
    I can write stories and poems, and not stories. Its encouraging to see your son ...
  • Chapter 2: Koto
    Now this chapter I really did enjoy! It reminds me of a cross between the nevere ...
  • Chapter Two: Rebirth
    Is this guy the father?  If so, who is the other guy? It would be kinda cool if ...
  • Summers Flowers
    The story almost has a rushed feeling to it. Some paragraphs are great, the comm ...
  • A Woebegone Girl
    To be honest I don't know too much about poetry, I write it every now and then b ...
  • Snakes
    I have several points to make.  Your writing is very mature. By that I could m ...
  • Pologue
    What is somewhat interesting is people with different beliefs could look at thi ...
  • Signs
    I wanted to give it 3.5/5 but I didn't know how to do that. Normally I would giv ...
  • 4. Chpt 3
    Hmmm, the plots developing.  I'm trying to wonder if he's a really nice teacher ...
  • 3. Chpt 2
    You've used the second chapter well to allow us to get to know her better. A bi ...
  • 2. Chpt 1
    I make a point not to give five stars.  But your description is brilliant! And ...
  • Prologue: The Pipe Dream [rewritten]
    I actually liked it. I could be wrong, but I wouldn't be surprised if you read ...
  • A Far-Sighted Love
    I only wish it was longer....