Like the other things I've read from you, it has got great promise, the opportun ...
'Cast Out' , Chapter 1
Plot: The feedback you gave me was of such high quality, that I feel pressured ...
This is pretty good... the story is progressing and your descriptions are pretty ...
Once again, the story has potential but I think you've entered a type of gen ...
I try to be strict with the star ratings I give, but some reason the next poem/s ...