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I knew it! I called it having to do with going into different worlds. I cringed ...
3. A Dream Steps into Reality
Overall I think the story progresses nicely. I'm not sure how many times I've pr ...
5. The Tutoring
It goes to show that when you have true friends, you don't need quantity, so lon ...
Chapter 1: Lights Out
General: For the short chapter that this was I was entertained with the setup an ...
1. THUD-WHIZZZ and then BHAM
General: I'm really liking the type of story this is. Within this first chapter ...