DexterBateman's Compliments

Compliments:  13

Last Compliment: 7/30/2016

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Submission Reviews

  • Count to Five
    John Proctor would be proud of Daniel.  The story moves along at a nice clip and ...
  • The last of Harborwind
    I think you've got a decent ending point there, so I don't think you need to wor ...
  • Breathe Deep
    I think I've found most of what people said confined to the second half. It's a ...
  • Recess Lessons
    Perhaps it would work better with simpler language, I must admit I feel I'm prob ...
  • Think of the Children
    I think if you are to use the explanation of his mental health, you need to real ...
  • Attempting to Rob Taco Bell
    I think this sub needs a really good edit. There are a lot of parts in here that ...
  • At Sea (Revision #?)
    Ah, I thought that might be what you were going for. There's a couple of things ...
  • A Passing (Revised)
    In contrast to the others, I quite like the juxtaposition of the agony and accep ...
  • Walls
    I'm afraid I'm just as confused as others seem to be here. I like the metaphors, ...
  • Night of Falling Stars
    The majority of this here flows really well, and I, like many of the others here ...
  • A Charming Tale
    This makes for interesting reading, that's for sure. At first I wasn't sure why ...
  • A Town of a Thousand Names
    I think I can comfortably say that this is the best prose I've read on the site. ...
  • I Am a Girl
    I like the way that you repeat the phrases "woman who is not my mother" and "bed ...