Dollys's Compliments

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Last Compliment: 11/25/2015

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  • Fairy Tail
    This caught my attention and drew me right in.  I liked the dialogue, it helped ...
  • Perficere operatur opera
    This is a hectic picture. The frenzy and speed came across so well, I hurtled th ...
  • Yours Truly, A Rewriter
    Oh this is recognisable!  Still unsure whether being pedantic or a perfectionist ...
  • The Gate
    5 Stars from Dol. I thoroughly enjoyed the dream-like quality to this haunting t ...
  • Hotel d'Amore
    Okay. So I had to read it several times too...The first thing that confused me w ...
  • Jerome Sanders
    5 Stars from Dol.  Oh I enjoyed this. The letters between Jerome and the Judge e ...
  • x
    I think numbers from one,up to and including, one-hundred are normally written i ...
  • I Am A Living Hermit
    Well Done for Posting to WeBook.  Stick with WeBook and you will certainly see y ...
  • The Colour of Happiness
    Well written and informative about the ritual of self-harming... and how it 'hel ...
  • Death's Messengers
    Congratulations on being a Monthly Challenge Runner Up - that's great news!  Dol ...
  • Left on Main
    Congratulations on your work being selected as a runner-up winner in the monthly ...
  • Refreshing the Tree
    a pot marked wall - a pot-marked wall ?  It took the Reader a while to understan ...
  • Father Through Son(Mirror)
    This was a really good urban tale. A teenagers view.  The emotion and scene sett ...
  • Shenanigans
    For this Reader, the storytelling did not flow.  A Rock band is about to play an ...
  • Training
    -rythmic beat - rhythmic?  The story-telling has no 'emotional' content - and th ...
  • Sufferance & Resilience
    Not sure about this but..every paragraph starts with a speech mark...but doesn't ...
  • The Doorway to a New Life
    Original - this really was 'outside the box' - well done!  The only thing that d ...
  • Mortified
    Been there !  Now, as a lady of more mature status, I generally tuck the back of ...
  • The Good Citizen
    Chilling! Dark!  Challenge:this month is about celebrating, sharing and giving s ...
  • Mid-century Teenage Drama (Revised, again...again and again)
    I liked this tale of teen angst.  I feel it would have helped the tale to set th ...
  • A summers breeze
    -My name is dinah  - Dinah? (names start with caps) -I was 16. - sixteen? (write ...
  • Once-Was
    The story-telling is very good. Mood and atmosphere in the writing is spot-on fo ...
  • No Insignificant Skin
    The first part of this story illustrated frustration and the second part, gentle ...
  • Mist
    Good story-telling and for me, captivating - up to the sentence:  It turned dogs ...
  • Out
    -desperate to fill my insides with that warm towel - unclear? Is he eating a tow ...
  • Between the first breath and the last
    -the cash is disappointly small. - disappointingly?  DESPAIR and ADDICTION This ...
  • Burn, baby, burn (revised Jan 17)
    Oooh! This was good - captivating.  Marika saving the Planet - single-handed.  A ...
  • For War
    Oh, This Reader felt Frankie's grief and need for revenge. This was good writing ...
  • The Long Yesterday (Revised)
    Oh this is so sad - and so current. Mental Illness is a tricky situation for peo ...
  • Lucy
    -No human in sight or sound—only birdsong  Suggestion: No human in sight nor sou ...
  • Frostmortem
    A tale based on the song 'Frosty the Snowman'?  This has stumped me. In the song ...
  • Call me Rudy
    -one of the heard mates asked - herd? -All around the heard more and more - herd ...
  • Ex Maria Virgine
    An Alternate Christmas Story - it certainly was. I enjoyed the Twist on the trad ...
  • Black Diamond's last chapter
    Joon - find webooks Facebook page and tell them about the crap formatting...  Yo ...
  • The Vampire's Tutor
    First sentence: I tried this on my kitchen floor. When I laid on the floor and ...
  • Betty Swoop, CST: Transcription 251 - A Different Kind of Affair
    -Angered flared - Anger  Oh What Fun! I had guessed where this was going-until t ...
  • Stone Blood
    -enogh -enough? -alcholic - alcoholic? -and addict. - an? -noraml  - normal? -fi ...
  • Memoir of an Urban Addict on the Road Again  (Book 2 On RVing Time Series)
    So it's a Memoire - But where is it taking me? No hints, clues or cliff-hangers ...
  • Tainted
    Be careful with (adverbs) words ending in = LY or ING...seek them out in your wo ...
  • Angels in the Crosshairs
    This was captivating. The sentence construction and pace wizzed the story along. ...
  • Wait For Me
    Your opening paragraph introduces the conflict - for sure.  You now have 600+ wo ...
  • The Life and Times of a Southern Party Girl
    -devoured - eat/ingest? perhaps imbibed, guzzled, swigged, quaffed or similar, j ...
  • How to build a castle in seven easy steps
    -The three croons - crones?  Your descriptive powers of the landscape and enviro ...
  • Cassia
    Sensual, yet Judgemental - an interesting mix.  The Pole Dance description was e ...
  • Salvage! Chapter 1
    The characters were described well, I could visualise them easily. Snippets of b ...
  • Revel
    Oooh,  Blood-curdling chiller!  A gory mess amongst the gravestones and crypts. ...
  • Moonstruck
    -and wandered - wondered? -cause - because? -saw on doors steps, - doorsteps? -i ...
  • The Witnesses
    "Shall we" he smiled - Question Mark?  bright blue eyes crinkling.- err, wot?  j ...
  • Prologue - The Boy
    General: 3 Star - Dragons, Teenagers, Special Powers  In friendship: remember th ...
  • Trust Me
    -gladly accepts each on - one?  Oooh Gory - or Wot!  Dad's a Serial Killer and s ...
  • I am you, you are me
    Not a fan of poetry - but I did enjoy this!  Halloween Challenge? yep, spooky da ...
  • Another Lost Soul, Another Lost Sale
    St Peter must've seen his fair share of Sorry Soul's at his gates - I wonder if ...
  • My Last Day of High School
    The word 'I' popped up time and time again and rattled me nerves - perhaps you c ...
  • An Eye for a Gangster
    A teenage crush. A new Country. Fitting in.  This is a story about 'fitting in' ...
  • Standing Up
    I really enjoyed this tale of self-discovery and assertion.  Now, I must ask...a ...
  • Prologue
    General: 3 Star = Overall impression  In friendship: remember that, if praise is ...
  • First Kiss
    Tip: Edit and spell-check BEFORE Posting.  could still remember remember coughin ...
  • Beside The Tree
    Dreamy, Reminiscent, Memories of a Grandparent?  I liked this - it was soft, ref ...
  • Serenity
    ooh Alcoholics Annonymous!  Loved it - didn't see it coming.  The tension and de ...
  • x
    Compelled to say: In my social network - and spanning back many years - my frien ...
  • Chapter 1 - Lottie
    General: 4 Star = Death - Bereavement - Coping  In friendship: remember that, if ...
  • First Kiss?
    I liked this - to me it bore a 'Forest Gump' style. The person saying it like it ...
  • FIRST KISS
    Glad you managed to upload the story - Webook has had some glitches since this n ...
  • x
    Is it a Wasp or a Flea or Head Lice..or CRABS? Yikes!  Kept me guessing all way ...
  • The Love that Kills
    - and bleed even more - bled? -There coming outside - They're? -I'm steping on ...
  • God speaks
    Your work is Refreshing, Unique, and full of surprises to make the Reader Laugh ...
  • Whispers into my Heart
    Oooh this WAS SPOOKY.  Some over-sexed alien feeding off of defenceless, lonely ...
  • The Empty Hole
    Challenges always 'clip our wings' - well, that's the challenge!  Regulars here ...
  • Go Big or Go home
    Oooh - this was cheeky!  I do love a good bank heist...and when it is bold...eve ...
  • Chapter Two
    3 Star - Journal Entry -   In friendship: remember that, if praise is silver, fe ...
  • upanishads
    It's all bollox to me...<scratches head>  "We have an infinite number of reasons ...
  • The New Professor
    General: 3 Star - A Meeting - New Colleagues - New Assignementt.  In friendship: ...
  • Always A Squirrel
    I can’t trust her with scissors. I lock the door when I take a shower.   Had to ...
  • Road to Somewhere
    4 Star  Sounds like the end of a school camping trip.  The minibuses ploughing ...
  • A Sentence
    5 Star.  Oh No! The holiday of a lifetime - followed by confirmation of cancer ...
  • Camping?
    5 Star.  Work Makes You Free.  Travel - in our lifetime - has certainly evid ...
  • Bumpy Ride
    3 Star.  I liked this! Oh gawwd I dread it happening to me. Thankfully my fli ...
  • Down the Rabbit Hole
    5 Star = Mania, Could do anything, the Number 4, depression.  This state is kn ...
  • Chapter One
    General: 5 Star: Vampires, Mentors, Academy - Good Stuff!  Friend: Remember, i ...
  • Introduction
    3 Star = A young man's strife, Saving Loved Ones - okay?  Friend: Remember, if ...
  • The Leather-bound Man
    General: 5 Star = Atmospheric, Gentle, Captivating - Brilliant!  Friend: Remem ...
  • Chapter 17: The Oracle
    4 Star = Insanity, Mind-Games, More revelations - Intriguing!  Friend: Remembe ...
  • Chapter 15: Nicole is Healed
    4 Star = Intrigue, Politics, Lupines - Spies and Feuds!  Friend: Remember, if ...
  • Chapter 14: An Alliance
    4 Star = Battles, BeastMen, Betrayal - Exciting Scenes!  Friend: Remember, if ...
  • Chapter 11: Avalon and Nicole get acquainted
    5 Star = Battle Scenes, Head Loppings, Feuds - Action Packed!  Friend: Remembe ...
  • Chapter 6: Rembrance:The Grand Ball part 2
    5 Star = Novice Vamp and Master, First Feed - Good Stuff!  In friendship: reme ...
  • Chapter 5: Good Samaritans
    General: 5 Star = Ballroom, Abduction, The Rapture, Undead - Fab Stuff!  In fr ...
  • Chapter 2: The Lure of the Damned
    General: 5 Star = BDSM, Erotica, Control & Submission, Escape - Fabulous!  In ...
  • Chapter 1: An Enemy Revealed
    General: 4 Star = Vampires, Maidens, Present Day - Good Stuff!  In friendship: ...
  • Chapter Five
    4 Star = Madam President, Harold, Suzanne - Catches On !  In friendship: remem ...
  • Chapter 1 The Return Home.
    General: 3 Star = Fantasy, Creatures, Families, Virus - Great!  Friend: Rememb ...
  • THE KEEP
    5 Star = A Castles Keep, Menacing Vibes, Stinky Dog - Good Stuff!  Friend: Rem ...
  • INTO THE DEPTHS
    General: 5 Star = Wizards, Captives, Rescues, Drama - Great Stuff!  Friend: Re ...
  • Part Six
    5 Star - The Beast Within-  Grrrrrr...GREAT!  Friend: Remember, if Praise is s ...
  • Part Five
    5 Star - Meat Cleavers, Furriness, Growls - Hilarious!    Friend: Remember, i ...
  • Johhny's Journal
    General: 3 Star = Virginity, Exploration, Tenderness - Lovely!  In friendship: ...
  • 2. The Society (Revised 04/15)
    General: 5 Star = Dhampir, Vampire, Intentions - Good Stuff!  In friendship: r ...
  • 7. Chapter 7
    General: 5 Star - Renewed Friendships, Mystery Ladies - Fab Stuff!  This Reade ...
  • 5. Chapter 5
    General: 5 Star = Demons, Sewers and Battles - Great Fun!  In friendship: reme ...
  • 2. Chapter 2 (1st Edit)
    General: 5 Star - Possession, Chase and Humour - Good Stuff  In friendship: re ...
  • Chapter Two: Love
    3 Star = Self-Help, Positive Self-talk, and Fear.  Friend: Remember, if Praise ...
  • Part 2
    General: 3 Star = A Rescue, A Stranger, Untold secrets - what fun!  In friends ...
  • Part 1 (Revised)
    General: 3 Star = Magical Paintings, Will Readings - Good Stuff!  In friendshi ...
  • A Wet Work Out
    5 Star = Erotica, Water, Twist at the end - Great Stuff!   In friendship: rem ...
  • Pointless
    Why, Thank You, Sir!   .. I know they are <grins>  Dollys
  • 8. A Warning
    General: 5 Star - The tension mounts and Will wants Jess Back!  A Chapter of s ...
  • 2. Chapter Two
    Ooops. What happened here?  The chapter just......stopped?  A couple of thin ...
  • 3. Chapter 3: Waiting For Quiet
    General: 4 Star = Breakfast with Mr and Mrs Suburbia!  In friendship: remember ...
  • 2. Chapter 2: Sleeplessness
    General: 5 Star = A married couple's bedroom scene!  I do enjoy the good descr ...
  • 3. Chapter 2: The Dreary Season
    General: 5 Star = Victorian England, in the Winter--ooh!  The Chapter describe ...
  • 3. Chapter Two
    General: 5 Star - Beautifullu written. A comfortable read.  It is nice when yo ...
  • 2. Chapter One
    General: 5 Star - Nothing like a bit of Gay Incest for bed time reading!  This ...
  • 1. Prologue
    General: 5 Star = Unrequited Love? Heart Strings aching? Awww!  This was a ten ...
  • 1. Who I Am and What I've Done
    If you want, let me know when it is edited and I'll take a look.  Be Well  D ...
  • 3. A Rose For Your Mercy
    General: 5 Star = Now... ...I am a  Fan of your work. A most enjoyable Chapter, ...
  • 2. Awakened
    = 5 Star  My only criticism would be that this chapter is way too short.  I ...
  • 2. Jenkins
    General: 5 Star = Well written.  This chapter moved the story on, Great!   So ...
  • The Demon Dilemma
    5 Star =  I am struggling to find the words I want to say about this poem, so ...
  • Elijah Needs A Friend Short Story G
    3star =  Enjoyed the writing piece - it was tender and gentle.  (understood go ...
  • The Bisciut Barrel
    5star =  The writing piece held my interest. . Liked the characters, Liked th ...
  • Falteks Bells - A Short Story
    4star =  The writing piece entertained me.  Liked four of the following:  th ...
  • 1. The Prologue
    5star =  The writing piece interested me - intrigue!  Liked the character, Li ...
  • Guitar playing - 16th Challenge
    Oooh! Surprise ending - for me.  I used to cut my Lovers toe-nails, a task I d ...
  • 10
    =3 Star The story unfolds and parts of the plot are revealed - good ideas and g ...
  • 3. The Prophecy (Final Draft)
    5star =  The writing piece interested me in some way- Magic and Missions - Gre ...
  • Hey Mr. Vampire?
    Ha Ha Ha  Vampires may do anything the Author wishes <she chuckles>.  Same i ...
  • Vampire Conception
    Anything vampiric that I can understand - I enjoy.  I enjoyed this!  Thanks ...
  • 9
    5star =  The writing piece moved me in some way - Your enthusiasm to detail is ...
  • 23. Chapter 24
    5star =  The writing piece moved me in some way - description of Aliens, fab! ...
  • Familiar Stranger
    2star  =  Was interested in the writing piece  (understood goal of writer) ...
  • A Majestic Evil
    4star =  The writing piece entertained me. Liked four of the following:  the ...
  • 1. Chapter 1
    4star =  The writing piece entertained me. Liked four of the following:  the ...
  • Werewolf
    Fast paced, Good read. I particularly liked the way you used dialogue, very rea ...
  • Presence
    That was great. The pace and descriptive text most agreeable. Loved it. Dolly
  • At The Water's Edge
    I liked the way the Aiden and Mageara flirted, in anticipation. Your chapter he ...
  • 1. Sleepless Nights
    This is good. The structure and paragraph lengths make the story engrossing. Se ...