Dollys's Compliments

Compliments:  103

Last Compliment: 9/11/2016

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  • Meeting Dylan Thomas
    5 Star  Oh this hit out - on several levels!  So insightful - so real - so tende ...
  • Party On
    5 Stars from Dol!  Oh I liked this. Haunted objects hungry for their next meal. ...
  • Brown Bread
    I had to read this twice to 'get it'. It could be me...or it could be that a few ...
  • Chapter 3- Hammer Hall
    General: -  loose fitting shirt sticking to his shirt. - repetition? -wylandan w ...
  • Burden of Truth
    OOh I liked this.  I am not too sure about the paragraph lay-outs in relation to ...
  • 1
    General: 2 Star - A love Story of poet and painter/artist.  In friendship: remem ...
  • Prologue
    General: 2 Star: Teen Angst, Frustrated Mother,   In friendship: remember that, ...
  • Stripped Vanity
    You are 14 or 15 years old and learning creative writing. Imagery and creativity ...
  • Chapter Two
    Examples of LY and ING words to reconsider/re-work:  ******************* Courtne ...
  • Orpheus and Eurydice
    -Orpheus hand hovered - Orpheus's hand hovered ?  Oh! 5 Stars - excellent stuff! ...
  • Circe
    This was good - the writing drew the Reader in and willed little may to escape s ...
  • Chapter 2
    The Reader liked the story/plot and this chapter gave the reader plenty of clues ...
  • Fool In FoodLove
    -I was sitting at an counter  - a? -restaraunt. - restaurant? -hurring quick - h ...
  • Blood for a Stone
    Ha Ha Ha...5 stars from me.  I laughed out loud at this - so funny.  The contemp ...
  • Nowhere to Nowhere
    I liked this. It resonated some of my own feelings, going back a decade or so. ...
  • Sugarplum Fairies
    -My wife had outdid herself on the lovely glazed ham.  -My wife outdid herself o ...
  • Bats of Bangor
    The Language and Word Choice was very good.   Must say, a story involving Stephe ...
  • Chapter One
    General: 5 Star - Original, Sea Tale, Thriller - Gritty  In friendship: remember ...
  • The Random Significance of Whipped Cream
    -Though - Through?  Fonts messed up - try and sort (a pain, I know..since the re ...
  • Venus' First Kiss
    him breath shallow - breathe? and not carrying when - caring?  I think I underst ...
  • Venus' First Kiss
    And - not to Nit Pik....Check Out the Titles in this challenge.  The Challenge B ...
  • 18.
    General: 5 Star - Vampires - Healing - Pain  In friendship: remember that, if pr ...
  • Chapter One
    General: 4 Star - Vampires - Purpose - Vengeance  In friendship: remember that, ...
  • Chapter two
    3 Star = Bombs - Terrorism - Stealth Jets !  In friendship: remember that, if pr ...
  • Chapter one
    General: 3 Star = Futuristic - Sci-Fi - Espionage - Romance !  In friendship: re ...
  • chapter 1
    General: 3 Star = New Beginnings - Waitress - Romance!  In friendship: remember ...
  • Chapter 1
    General: 3 Star = Sweethearts breaking up, Teen Angst   In friendship: remembe ...
  • Anya and Vincent (May add to later)
    General: 5 Star = Erotic, Intriguing, Fast-Paced - A Good Read!  Friend: Remem ...
  • Chapter 3: Aftermath
    General: 3 Star = Arguments, Fathers and Sons, Grief  - Emotional Stuff!  In f ...
  • Chapter 1
    General: 3 Star = Argument with Parents, Rebellious Teenager - Fun!  Friend: R ...
  • Chapter One
    General: 3 Star = Friendships, Battle-Training, Magic - Good Stuff!  In friend ...
  • Chapter One
    General: 2 Star = Passionate, Married Couple, Morning - What next?  Friend: Re ...
  • Chapter 2: Pain [Revised]
    General: 3 Star = Tender, Emotional, Dying Mother - Well Done!  In friendship: ...
  • The Beginning
    General: 3 Star = Blood & Gore, Nightmares, Horror - Good Stuff.  Friend: Reme ...
  • 1. Knots
    5 Star = Bureacracy, Brave New World, Protests - Good Stuff!  Friend: Remember ...
  • Chapter 19: Old Associates Part 2
    5 Star = Lineage, Elders, Vampires and Feuds - Exciting !  Friend: Remember, i ...
  • Chapter 16: What Webs We Weave
    5 Star  =  Assasins, Action, Shapeshifters - Good Stuff!  Friend: Remember, if ...
  • Chapter 12: Revelations Part 2
    5 Star = Sadomasochism, Ownership, Bondage - Chilling!  Friend: Remember, if P ...
  • Chapter 12:Revelations
    4 Star = Mind-Reading, Memories, Revenge - Good Stuff!  Friend: Remember, if P ...
  • Chapter 1: The Professor's Love Trouble
    General: 5 Star = Original, Interesting, Coma's, Spooky - Wonderful!  In frien ...
  • Part Four
    General: 5 Star - Skullduggery, Tampered bats, Growls - Fab Stuff!  Friend: Re ...
  • Part Three
    General: 5 Star = Fear, Nerves and Nicknames - Hilarious!  Friend: Remember, i ...
  • Part Two
    General: 5 Star = Sexy Girl, Geek, Dance-Floor, Stiffy - Such Fun!  Friend: Re ...
  • Part One
    General: 5 Star =  Laddish Humour, College, Fatty's - Great Stuff!  Friend: Re ...
  • 3. Rescue (Revised 04/27)
    General: 4 Star = Rescue, Revelations, Love - Detailed writing, lovely!  In fr ...
  • 3. ...To Almighty God...
    General: 5 Star = Radio Show, Tormented Nuns - Great!  In friendship: remember ...
  • 2. I Confess...
    General: 5 Star = Retribution, Unexpected Visitors - Good Stuff!  In friendshi ...
  • 6. Chapter 6
    General: 5 Star = Bar Fights, Magical Forces and New Beginings - Great!  In fr ...
  • 1. Chapter 1 (1st Edit)
    General: 5 Star = Witty, Chatty, Humour and Un-Magic - Yummy!  In friendship: ...
  • 3. Chapter 3
    4star =  The writing piece surprised me with a treasure map, great! . Liked f ...
  • 3. Chapter 2
    General: 2 Star = A Park, A courting Couple, An angry passer by - Fun!  In fri ...
  • 2. Chapter 1
    General: 2 Star = Charity Shop, New Job, Sleazy Colleague - Great Fun! I think ...
  • 2. Chapter 2
    General: 5 Star - Atmospheric, Moody, Strippers - Good Stuff!  In friendship: ...
  • 1. Chapter 1
    General: 4 Star = Entertained me. This caught my attention – an Enjoyable read. ...
  • 4. Chapter 4: Transportation and Lodging
    General: 3 Star - Upsetting the waitress, Bathing in tubs - Great Stuff!  In f ...
  • 3. Chapter 3: Home
    General: 3 Star - A magician's family, A goal, and shyness - Great!  In friend ...
  • 2. Chapter 2: Assignment
    General: 3 Star = Assignments and Shy Magicians - Blissfull!  In friendship: r ...
  • The Prey
    General: 5 Star = Original, Scary, Erotic and entertaining - Great!  In friend ...
  • Minerva's Wild Night
    General: 5 Star - Delicious - Original - Vampires - A TREAT!  Some of the para ...
  • 4. Iboga
    General: 5 Star = Opiates, Remedies and New Experiences - Good Stuff!  Well wr ...
  • At the front door
    General: 4 Star - Pop Stars, Bouncers and Fans - Goody!  In friendship: rememb ...
  • 1. Chapter 1
    General: 5 Star = Brilliant. Well written. Vampires - Yummy!  I agree with Yan ...
  • The Wild Man part one
    General: 5 Star = Survivalist, Fast Paced, Action Packed - Great Stuff!  So pl ...
  • 2. Chapter 1
    General: 4 Star = Futuristic Planets, Bounty Hunters and Aliens - Great!  Frie ...
  • Bad Day
    General: 4 Star = Serial Killer, Detectives, Prostitues - Crime Drama.   In f ...
  • The Fifth Musician
    General: 5 Star = Gangsters, Cosa Nostra, the Mob - Fab stuff!  This was cleve ...
  • 1. Overview
    General: 3 Star = The memoir is interesting, with a little revision, it could be ...
  • 2. Jessica
    General: 5 Star = Well written and interesting. Fresh ideas and approach.  A Fa ...
  • A Watch in the Night (Parts I & II)
    General: 5 Star = Brilliant. Well written. Well Done.  In friendship: remember ...
  • 2. Chapter 1: Daffodils
    General: 5 Star = A captivating Chapter. Well written. Interesting.  This Chap ...
  • 1. Alex and Joey
    5star =  The writing piece  - action packed and kept me in suspense! Drug Gang ...
  • 5. Greed
    General: 4 Star = This Chapter was your best one yet. For fiction, the piece wa ...
  • 6. Lust
    General: 4 Star = Great, She's annoyed again! Ha Ha This was written well and t ...
  • 1. Chapter 1
    General: 4 Star = Entertained me. This caught my attention –  an Enjoyable read ...
  • Mister Washington
    General: 5 Star = Brilliant. Well written. Fresh ideas and approach.  A Fabulou ...
  • Chapter Nine: Lipstick on a Donkey
    5star =  The writing piece demonstrated Sadies childhood with irony and humour ...
  • Lashings And Lashings ...
    5star =  The writing piece is such a good Yarn, the cattiness has me in fits of ...
  • 7. Chapter Seven(3rd)
    5star =  The writing piece moved me in some way - kept me in suspense!  Liked ...
  • THE GHOSTCATCHER - A Short Story
    5star =  The writing piece entertained me - Good idea, indeed.  Liked the cha ...
  • 1. Chapter One(4th)
    5star =   The writing piece kept my interest - enjoyed the dialogue between te ...
  • 1. Prologue
    5star =  The writing piece entertained me - action and history, great!. Liked ...
  • "Here's to me!"
    5star =  The writing piece moved me in some way - oooh - I really don't like S ...
  • Story Gone Wrong
    2star  =  Was interested in the writing piece (understood goal of writer)  Li ...
  • Following Life - part 3
    5star =  The writing piece moved me in some way -  This is so touching - thoug ...
  • Following Life - part two
    5star =  The writing piece moved me in some way -  Such a touching piece, Powe ...
  • Jason Gets Arrested
    5star =  The writing piece moved me in some way-  Curiosity got to me..great! ...
  • Finding Esta: Novel Teaser. Chapter 1
    5star =  The writing piece moved me in some way - Intriguing!  Liked the char ...
  • The White Zone
    2star  =  Was interested in the writing piece (understood goal of writer)  Li ...
  • Familiar Stranger
    2star  =  Was interested in the writing piece  (understood goal of writer) ...
  • Pain for Pleasure: Willing Victim Number Wun
    5star =  The writing piece moved me in some way - suspense and sex, great!  L ...
  • 4. Chapter 4
    5star =  The writing piece moved me in some way - realistic dialogue, very good ...
  • 3. Chapter 3
    5star =  The writing piece moved me in some way - made me laugh out, not many d ...
  • 7
    2star  =  Was interested in the writing piece (understood goal of writer)  Li ...
  • Twenty Two
    5star =  the writing piece moved me in some way. Liked the characters, Liked t ...
  • 3. Chapter 3
    oooh Shivvers down my back - Fabulous Sentence - Liked: His touch was as icy a ...
  • Something Needs Fixing
    This was a great read, believable. Thoroughly enjoy Erotica, when well written. ...