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Last Compliment: 9/6/2016

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Project Reviews

Submission Reviews

  • Slippery Soap
    4 Stars  Mr. Shapiro? “I mean, - remove speech mark? all blind.” the - comma, no ...
  • Frankenstein Immortal (fragment)
    I did not 'get' this sub at all - had it not been for the Title I would have fel ...
  • Duo
    Runner Up - Congratulations!  Dol.
  • Duo
    A good idea for a story - much preferable, to my mind, to Zombies.  This could a ...
  • Blue
    I liked the 'feel' of this...melancholy, well to me.  I agree with Alina and Ale ...
  • Beyond the Prism
    5 Star! OOh...was the Indigo gown the dress she wore to her mom's funeral? Did M ...
  • Chilli Cheese Dogs
    5 Stars from Dollys!  I particularly liked: "when you were five and how you thou ...
  • Can't Love You Anymore
    Wow Tony - Way to Go, Dude! 5 Stars!  Big Smile and huge clapping of hands!  You ...
  • Heat
    BTW:  Wet your finger and stick it in your ear and wiggle it. Now, you tell me, ...
  • Alone
    This is a story of hope for the teenage readers and I believe they will relate t ...
  • A Very Mr. Darcy Christmas
    - misery and lonlieness - loneliness? - It was a week before Christmas - It is.. ...
  • Two Festivals
    we have a grand festival in which we call  - remove 'in' ?  I am still puzzled. ...
  • King of Pain
    I liked this essay. It covered film, book, music, life-experience.  We draw on o ...
  • Walled and Bounded
    Oh I liked this!  Totally drew the Reader in..felt a bit like The Dome (S King). ...
  • Collision
    I really liked the way Maya's personality and style came across. The Reader felt ...
  • Darkness falls
    5 Star - smooth and engaging read. Loved it.  and checked his katana was ready i ...
  • Doppler Feelings Log, January 12, 2013(Revised 6/23/14)
    Oh Gawwwd, poor bloke has got himself a High-Maintenance wife...ha ha ha  I enjo ...
  • Doors Of Death(Revised)
    You are only 14 / 15 years old and you take on board criticism and advise with a ...
  • Chapter Two
    You are only 14/15 years old - Well Done You!  Be careful with words ending in = ...
  • Chapter One - Part 2
    You are only 14/15 yrs old: Well Done You!  Repetition - Using the SAME word , c ...
  • The Wedding
    View 1: OOh! One chap, Sam,  playing off two young girls - what a git!  Dump him ...
  • Guided Meditation
    Her yoga pants - At first I thought this referred to her breathing (pants/pantin ...
  • I win
    Bieber?
  • The Mid-Life Crisis of a Buccaneer
    This Reader enjoyed the 'Punch-Up' and farcical nature of the tale.  The charact ...
  • Tell es-Sultan
    Oh this was well written. The tone and mood drew this Reader in.   The normality ...
  • Read Me
    Ha Ha Ha...berlimey, I don't think I've ever submitted feedback in this way !  E ...
  • Flames
    Megan...I have had time to consider where my funny-bone was tickled and what jol ...
  • Flames
    -squawck - squawk? - I here footsteps- hear?  Not sure what to say about this - ...
  • Chapter 1
    General: 5 Star - Murders - Mystery - Affairs - Deceit = Great!  In friendship: ...
  • In which Solomon Fierce receives an offer he can't refuse
    A Runner Up in the Monthly Challenge!  Whoot Wooo!  Congrats!
  • Black Diamond's last chapter
    AlecS..thank you. That's prolly why I have such a headache with formatting! I ha ...
  • Let's Go Home
    A female soldier returning home - topical in the current climate.  You are a goo ...
  • In which Solomon Fierce receives an offer he can't refuse
    Since the re-launch I have had terrible trouble with formatting and uploading - ...
  • The Guardian
    Flamboyat - Flamboyant? -Breakfast Tiffany's, - at? -trying squeezing my - rewor ...
  • Rite of Passage
    Ooh Visuals flew from the page.  Pure escapism for this Reader - those wretched ...
  • 13
    As it is a Halloween Challenge I think the date should have been 31st!   Agreed, ...
  • High Moon
    Well, I burst out laughing at the image of a Killer with a Pumpkin for a head - ...
  • The Oldest Kid on the Block
    I smiled all the way through this - I could feel the 'glee'.  The Reader was ent ...
  • Lessons in Human Interaction
    Unsure if this is "YOUR most memorable day in school and a testimony to the wond ...
  • Cool Blue Ion Trails
    Ooh, visuals leapt from the piece. Great.  The Reader liked your sentence constr ...
  • Casaterra
    I had to read this twice to understand it.   Cruelty had made the dog vicious. ...
  • A Small Miracle
    I liked this - shows that even bigots and racists have a code of 'honour' that t ...
  • Red Purse
    I kept thinking off that purse  - of? Mom always down next to  - puts?  Enchant ...
  • Resurrection
    It is nice that Webook has burst open..in Springtime!  Be Well,  Dollys
  • 1. Obscenus
    This is good. It makes the reader want more. The care that you have taken in yo ...
  • A Trip to Heaven.
    5 Star  Living is hard, it's dying that's easy (Alannis Morissette?)  Well, ...
  • Goodbye
    5 Star!  Ooh - Sarah IS sad. Hope all her 'things' arent relocated to the loc ...
  • The doormat leaves
    5 Star!  This will resonate with SO MANY wives out there, I am sure!  Partic ...
  • Chapter One
    4 Star - Covens, Vampires and Crimson Eyes - Good Stuff!  Friend: Remember, if ...
  • Stage Sex
    General: 3 Star = The story is interesting, with a little revision, it could be ...
  • Basement.
    3 Star = Spooky, Gripping, Lurking Evil - Wowser!  In friendship: remember tha ...
  • 1. Chapter 1: Disappointment
    General: 5 Star = Captivating descriptions. Bored Housewife? - Yummy!  I so ho ...
  • Marilyn Monroe
    Poetry is not my thing. I was invited to review this.  Wish you well in the c ...
  • My Place Is Here
    Poetry is not my thing. I was invited to review this.  Wish you well in the c ...
  • I Like Being Alive
    Poetry is not my thing. I was invited to review this.  Wish you well in the c ...
  • Frustration
    5 Star  I do not usually read poetry, it simply is not my "thang" and I am not ...
  • Time
    5 Star  I do not usually read poetry, it simply is not my "thang" and I am not ...
  • Femme Fatale - 17th Challenge
    =5 Star  Smirking is good!  Ha Ha... liked this.  Be Well  Dollys
  • Uninvited Guest, Part 6 - 17th challenge
    = 5 Star  Hospital room? Victim?  Were they able to extract the digital reco ...
  • Chapter Four(3rd)
    5star =  The writing piece moved me in some way -  they were re-united! Yayyy! ...
  • Uninvited Guest - 17th Challenge
    = 5 Star  I liked it because.. I've kept a diary since 1972.  Enjoyed the tw ...
  • The Gynaecologist's Chair
    Ha Ha Ha HA  My persona is "Mary Hinge" when I play war games at work on PC -s ...
  • Lingo!
    These are Free - no honest, trust me  :)  The Lady of Shallora  Kitty Fisher ...
  • Truth in Advertising
    OHH Gawwwd!  Just dawned on me ! Y I K E S.   So my ex was right after all ...
  • Many Mansions
    Ha Ha it was a typo..they didn't have spellchecker in dem days!  It was meant ...
  • Ghost
    That was lovely.  A lonesome feel came to me when I read it.  Sorry not to b ...
  • 21. Chapter 22
    5star =  The writing piece moved me in some way - action packed, great! Liked ...
  • Hind Sight
    Sorry. I don't get it - prolly me.  Memories - most of mine are happy and fon ...
  • Of snowdrops, mice and yew
    Ohh Gawwd, I hope she took her teef out ! <grins> Enjoyed it. Dolly
  • 7. Chapter 6 - Anthony
    Not sure if this is " work in progress" as it is very short? The description of ...