As they walked in silence towards Ani's car, Jed felt more than a little guilty. ...
This needs to be cut down to 150 words per the contest guidelines. Maybe try to ...
The Red Skirt
Good start, made me want to know more about the girl he once loved. I'd try to ...
Tunes of nostalgia.
I liked the imagery your writing evoked. My only criticism was to try and repla ...