Eluzar's Compliments

Compliments:  28

Last Compliment: 10/9/2009

Brilliant (4)

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  • Does this diaper make my butt look big?
    Wow! This has a great message, and is very touching. It's very straightforward, ...

  • This is actually a really good story. It illustrates the feeling of not wanting ...
  • 2.
    Great job! This story is very deep and very thought provoking. Everybody is sayi ...
Enlightening (5)

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  • 4. Chapter 4
    The line about being attacked by a cow was funny, yet something that someone mig ...
  • 2. Chapter 2
    The second chapter is everything the first one was and more. In some parts the s ...
  • 3. Chapter 3
    This story is getting exciting! I'm sure kids will be interested. I agree with P ...
Helpful (11)

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  • 1. Chapter 1
    I really like how this sets up the story and really gives me a good understandin ...
  • THE LIBERTY'S
    Apart from some grammatical errors there is only one comment I have to make: The ...
  • THAT’S WHERE I’LL BE
    The imagery, rhyme, and rhythm is great, but I think you should put it in poem f ...
Unique (2)

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  • This is probably the first time I've ever read a short story so ingenious on WEb ...
  • Desperate Times
    This is a great story. I agree with LuckyDuckling, the mystery is wonderful. Her ...
Motivating (3)

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  • With You
    I like how you went above and beyond the normal love poem and seasoned it with u ...
  • How I Reminisce
    Wow! That's a phenomenal description of love the flows right off the page.
  • Brittle
    Wow - that story had my heart beating fast. Scary, yet not too disturbing (not t ...
In-depth (3)

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