Eluzar's Compliments

Compliments:  5

Last Compliment: 7/27/2009

Enlightening (5)

Submission Reviews

  • 4. Chapter 4
    The line about being attacked by a cow was funny, yet something that someone mig ...
  • 2. Chapter 2
    The second chapter is everything the first one was and more. In some parts the s ...
  • 3. Chapter 3
    This story is getting exciting! I'm sure kids will be interested. I agree with P ...
  • Midnight melody
    I really enjoy reading your paragraphs. They may not be the very best writing on ...

  • This is a very thought-provoking story in a good way. Before I get into critiqui ...