Eluzar's Compliments

Compliments:  11

Last Compliment: 7/27/2009

Helpful (11)

Submission Reviews

  • 1. Chapter 1
    I really like how this sets up the story and really gives me a good understandin ...
  • THE LIBERTY'S
    Apart from some grammatical errors there is only one comment I have to make: The ...
  • THAT’S WHERE I’LL BE
    The imagery, rhyme, and rhythm is great, but I think you should put it in poem f ...
  • 5. Chapter 5
    Okay, a few points -   It just occurred to me that all people of power are calle ...
  • 4. Chapter 4
    Second paragraph: "The inside of the city was better than he expected." What doe ...
  • 4. Chapter 4
    A single line of dialogue doesn't count as a paragraph. Three or so does.  Don't ...
  • 3. Chapter 3
    I agree with candygirl; you introduced new characters very well. It was a little ...
  • 2. Chapter 2
    I like this story. You know that, so I won't say so from now on. I'll just get t ...
  • 1. Chapter 1
    I'm intrigued! I hope I'll get the chance to read into your later chapters.  I ...
  • The Third Fire
    I like this piece a lot. It is unique and unlike almost any other short story I ...
  • 1. Chapter 1: Rejection
    You're doing great so far. I loved this chapter. I think you should think about ...