Green_Regol's Compliments

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Last Compliment: 8/12/2011

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  • Chapter 1
    --familiar resistance; like a cotton veil--wrong use of a semicolon. Both clause ...
  • Tom
    O_O My review...it disappeared... >_< I'll rewrite it soon. Grrr.
  • Farewell my   s..tweet...
    Whoa. I didn't get it at first. I get it now. Whoa.
  • Farewell my   s..tweet...
    This might just be me because I don't tweet, but it took me a while to figure ou ...
  • The Turtle
    --Karl, the submarines young navigator, - apostrophe between the e and the s in ...
  • Going Down
    I liked "stormed" as opposed to "stomped."
  • Chapter One
    --No, the special, little talent that I possess-- No comma after "special."  --I ...
  • Artinoeh
    I thought it was! What syllable is the accent on?
  • Artinoeh
    Eggsellent. I get it now. :)
  • Artinoeh
    I agree with Sanger and Michelle4Laughs. There are some ways you can rephrase/sh ...
  • Epitaph of Zephyr
    I stand by my previous suggestions.  …My name is (comma) as you have heard(comma ...
  • Epitaph of Zephyr
    Oh nose. The spelling and grammar is what did you in here.  "Jonathan Russell(no ...
  • Epitaph of Zephyr
    Summary: I think this sounds pretty cool. I would've given this a four or a five ...
  • Thirty-Five (Epilogue)
    "it(no apostrophe)s wide expanse of light blue"   (not done yet. shall return to ...
  • Thirty
    "sliding two slice(s) of bread."  "if by horrible clumsiness; I dropped my peanu ...
  • I Swear I'm Not Giggling
    Not sure if this is what you're looking for, but what the hell. :)
  • Mi Cara
    Whoa. I see the conflict there. Through so few words, you say a lot, and I can s ...
  • St. Jude
    Just a bunch of suggestions, you can take em or leave em. ^_^  "Her stuffed anim ...
  • Chapter 1
    ...I like the "for example" "To be honest" and "but still." If this were a forma ...
  • Chapter 1
    "the corner was crisply made and the stark white comforter on it" -- there's som ...
  • Let Sleeping Zombies Lie
    Haha, this is funny. And yes, there obviously is a lie in there - possibly more, ...
  • The Stuff Girls Dreams are Made of...
    Taking Back Sunday...I only have one song by them, and I've been meaning to get ...
  • Preface/Foreword
    Ooh. You're good. That just means I have to be pickier than usual.  "This is not ...
  • Walking the Dog
    I'm guessing you really like those names - you use them a lot when you don't hav ...
  • The Wedding is Off
    Np! Ooh, snarled, I like that one... Now I'm gonna get picky. "“You're a liar(co ...
  • Disclaimer!
    ...I'll come back when I'm allowed to be a grammar-nazi. ^_^
  • The Wedding is Off
    Okay. At first I was a little confused. I thought this was a conversation over t ...
  • Prologue No. 2
    Oh. I didn't have much more to read, did I?  "Trish looked eager as she glanced ...
  • Marlee O'Keefe
    Wow, that's a lot of description. How only one star?  I agree with BZAlizandre a ...
  • ComeWhatMay
    I like the main character's voice, I'm saying that right off the bat.   In that ...
  • Chapter 1
    AAAAHHH GOSH NOOOO!  Sorry, I had just typed up an entire critique. Then I accid ...
  •   The egress of man
    Someone once told me to try and use "He/She" as little as possible, and now i'm ...
  • True Lies
    "where the truth seams to always be hiding" --Seams should be "seems"  I'm think ...
  • 0. Chapter 1
    I really wish I could add to my old comments and not make a completely new one. ...
  • Chapter One: New World and Order
    General: "but I don’t know about this whole light thing." -- just a suggestion: ...
  • Chapter 1: Reflecting
    General: I think the lone sentence at the very beginning can be combined with th ...
  • Chapter 1: The New Atikalyn
    General: Based on all the praise alone, I can tell you're good. That just means ...
  • 2.
    General: I think the first two paragraphs can be merged into one.  "I can’t even ...
  • Isolation.(editied)
    "The udder length of the hallway, combined with the iridescent lights, made it s ...
  • Sisters Again
    "seperate" - I discovered recently that this word is spelt "separate"  "and yes, ...
  • A Little Dream of Mine
    General: Awww... *e-hug*  "You(r) grandparents wish to see you (comma) too,"  Fo ...
  • Know When To Hold Em (Part Two)
    General: "Lee bloodshot eyes opened wide" -- "Lee" should be "Lee's"  "“I know l ...
  • 1.
    Wow. Didn't realize I'd only had a few more paragraphs left to read. >_<  Really ...
  • Prologue
    General: "I ended up with Becky, (a?) pretty chick who "  Plot: I don't know exa ...
  • Dying In Two Dimensions
    I didn't get it when I started. When I finished, I did. Then I read it again and ...
  • Know When To Hold Em (Part One)
    General: "I must admit it gets fairly depressing to see the world go to hell in ...
  • Prelude
    Oooh...the Void... Sounds like a perfect place for an adventure!  "for the ancie ...
  • A Little Help From a Friend
    General: If you can add dialogue to the first paragraph of this chapter, I think ...
  • Prologue
    Gah! I commented on this, and the comment disappeared! Grr! I'm just gonna redo ...
  • Prologue
    "I remember the event so clearly, it was..." -- keep with the past tense. Even i ...
  • Good dreams and Bad News
    "no matter how crazy people think I am" -- thought I was.  "It would have had t ...
  • 1. Prologue
    Way to begin a story! Introducing a death in the very first paragraph is, in my ...
  • Seven
    Oops, I meant paragraph. Third to last paragraph.
  • Four
    General: Muahaha. I liked the fight. It just makes everyone feel so much better ...
  • One
    Excellent!
  • Chapter 2
    Pretty epic battle, by the way!
  • Chapter Three
    Character Development: I really like the way you have developed Mr. Nelson. The ...
  • Brutal (edited)
    General: "I grass along the grave was dancing" - I don't think you meant to writ ...
  • Chapter 1 (Second Draft)
    General: "able to resist the call of a older vampire" - should be "an older"  I ...