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  • Chapter 102: The Quest
    --This is an old spell that is often used to protect treasures.  No one intendin ...
  • 2. A Hunter's Work
    --to her blazing, dark red hair-- when I think blazing, I think of something bri ...
  • Prologue
    --“Wow, it’s so hot here! I never saw anything like this before.” John said -- T ...
  • Prologue
    --Sarah opened her blue eyes which she had closed because her sunglasses did not ...
  • Once Upon a Twitter
    AHAHAHAHA!  I heard epic movie trailer music in my head for the first 6 tweets a ...
  • Epitaph of Zephyr
    Again with the beckon. "Beackon" is not a word; you're looking for "beckon."  I ...
  • Thirty-Four
    "I took off like a bullet, running in circles" -- This sounds more like what a ...
  • Thirty-Two
    (editing my feedback) *collapse into the bed, sweating and sated, that is. ^_^
  • Thirty-One
    "Blue trotted to (the) door to be let out."  I can't remember much about before ...
  • Twenty-Eight
    Yay, she's talking about zombies again!  "if I w(e)nt to bed at all(comma) and m ...
  • Working From Home
    Oh! Wow! I get it now! That therapist part really confused me, but I get it now! ...
  • Walking the Dog
    To make the playing-with-himself thing even clearer, you might have to change th ...
  • Three Dollar Fingers
    "“Boys!” Mrs. Slatker said" -- because of the exclamation point, I'd change "sai ...
  • Die. Hate. Cry.  (Live. Love. Laugh.)
    Clever rhyming, I think. Enhances the depth of the poem. I like!
  • Violet: More then Human
    I'm a little bit confused. Her original name meant Snake beore she changed it to ...
  • Autumn Leaves
    General: "out from underneath the rocky safe haven a sea salt and chamomile soak ...
  • 94. Day 94
    Oooh. I already don't like Mariana.  So far, so good!
  • Chapter 1: The Raving Rave
    "Although Emily didn’t like to go to these sorts of things, (...) Raves were jus ...
  • Who Am I?
    General: "The wind from your nostrils’ " --no apostrophe is needed after "nostri ...
  • Eighteen
    General:  "If Porter really had seduced her, then I underst(oo)d his side"  Time ...
  • Sixteen
    "I would wake up hot and uncomfortable, but it (was) the thought that count(ed) ...
  • An Untold Ending (Prologue)
    General: "The world slowed, the moment before Death dragging out in front of Ear ...
  • Burn Out
    Haha! I knew someone too self-absorbed/self-pitying to see the bright side of li ...
  • 2. Chapter 1
    "Well, there was definitely something wrong with him, but it wasn't that he had ...
  • Five
    *cringe* *screech* - that was the sound of my heart breaking a little bit. It so ...
  • Chapter 1
    General: "doGruodna,ruoivasruo,orehruoerauoY" - I hope the meaning of this isn't ...
  • Ideas (Soon to be removed, for updated version)
    General: "John Foreman, vice president of the recruiting department in Strite En ...
  • Preface (Second Draft)
    General: "It was in 1968 when the Coquille Tribe, the Shawnee, the Navaho, Nguni ...
  • Chapter Two
    General: Ooh... full moon... That is an awesome sentence to end a chapter on, he ...