Green_Regol's Compliments

Compliments:  29

Last Compliment: 8/9/2011

In-depth (29)

Project Reviews

Submission Reviews

  • Chapter One
    I'm back!  --Another day. Another dollar. Another person would cease to breathe ...
  • Chapter 1 Choke Lung (Published Version)
    I'm gonna be picky.  A warm breeze entered through the balcony doors, bringing s ...
  • Epitaph of Zephyr
    Quick fix: -"My name IS not important" -"I dreamed just LIKE everyone else" -Use ...
  • Thirty-Three
    General: Some of the past few chapters begin with the same phrase "I woke up the ...
  • Kindar's Cure
    General: "The amore held her up, his face becoming panicked by her struggles." - ...
  • The Show Must Go On
    Run at the speed of fear. I like that. I daresay it's original.
  • Camping?
    "courtesy of his new, best friend." -- I don't think the comma's needed there, d ...
  • Camping?
    It seems this story has already gone through a lot of changes.  I got a little c ...
  • The Liar's Day Out.
    Just some quick fixes you can take or ignore: "But before (take out "me") giving ...
  • Loss
    Haha, this makes me happy!  ...Okay, weird comment considering the content, I kn ...
  • Loss
    In response to one of the people who commented here, it doesn't actually say tha ...
  • Chapter 1
    General: "Bertha smiled to herself and remembered how things use to be when she ...
  • Chapter 1
    General: "In his hand he twirled a bottle cap that danced like a young ballerina ...
  • Trial
    I agree with the prior comments. The grammar is off and punctuations are missing ...
  • 1.
    "I had just arrived at the Principal’s office, and had barley sat down before I ...
  • Along Came the Walker
    "It's not easily being a forgery expert, not when the client expects it to be (a ...
  • Mommy Dearest
    ...The last line contradicts the rest of the poem...but in a good way...a good w ...
  • 1.
    Also, just an idea I'm throwing out there: because he's six and imagining red li ...
  • Twelve
    "A man said to me as he was approaching" -- "A man said as he approached me."  " ...
  • Eight
    Excellent!  Now, Another suggestion I just thought of now: I want to know how Ja ...
  • Eight
    From " 'No,' I glared at her. "What am I supposed to do when you're gone?' " to ...
  • Six
    General: I think you should mention Matthew in the first day of school, and have ...
  • Opposites
    Huh. Sounds like there could be more to this poem than meets the eye. Is there a ...
  • One
    General: Wow. This is good. I actually need to read this again to see where it m ...
  • Lilies
    Whoa whoa whoa - back up - the year is 5003! I wanna know what everything looks ...
  • Chapter 1 (Second Draft)
    "It was almost as if a BREATH of fresh air" "those three may have been lycan's" ...
  • Chapter One
    General: "Mum's jewelry draw." I think it's actually spelt drawer, but I'm not e ...