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Project Reviews

  • Ecape
    Wow. The hook is very hooking. I had to look at this and make sure it wasn't non ...
  • The Legacy
    In my opinion, this is a very long blurb. Most people like to read two-three par ...
  • Faeyte
    In the two-paragraph overview, it seems as if the story shall revolve around the ...
  • The Missing Memory
    Very enticing overview! I really like it. The only thing I'd fix is the tense - ...

Submission Reviews

  • Chapter 105: The Search
    I'm thinking a good excuse for Kern to not have originally known where they were ...
  • Chapter 04: Summons
    Just throwing an idea out there. It'd be cool to see some emotion on the faceles ...
  • Chapter One
    --Silenced followed that statement, -- I think you see what's wrong there.  I'm ...
  • Chapter 2
    Back again!  --He shone marbled -- There's either a wrong word or a missing word ...
  • Chapter One
    -- gremlins-short creatures with screwed up faces and pointy ears-came -- it too ...
  • Chapter One
    Ahh! Tiny font!  There's a lot of just-dialogue at the beginning. If you want yo ...
  • Tom
    --Why didn't you answer the phone?!-- Double punctuation like this irks me. It's ...
  • Tom
    I'm telling you now that a lot of the stuff I pick on may come off as, well, pic ...
  • Act I, Chapter 1
    - the dress ended up as a random mess like a thick spatter of blood where I drop ...
  • Chapter Two
    --It had been two months since my life had changed irrevocably in the town of Ba ...
  • Chapter One
    Wow, long chapter. Depending on how many times I nit-pick at this, it may take m ...
  • 1- First Day
    I feel like getting over-the-top picky.  "Sarah Allen rushed down the corridor ...
  • Mercy
    If you want, you can enter your short summary as well. I know some people rate b ...
  • Thirty-Two
    "All (that) mattered "  "I searched his face, removing one hand from his shoulde ...
  • Twenty-Nine
    "I sat back, watching him heap the food on my plate, smiling." -- took me a minu ...
  • Twenty-Six
    General: "It was like nothing (had) ever happened."  "I woke up the next morning ...
  • Twenty-Five
    General: The first few paragraphs seem a bit choppy. You might've meant for it t ...
  • Twenty-Three
    "I never had to take care of anyone but myself, it was all worth it." --Well... ...
  • Twenty-Two
    I had created the worst Thanksgiving meal "every" to grace the earth.  When Grac ...
  • Twenty
    "How could have a year gone by so fast?" -- I think it should be, "How could a y ...
  • Query Letter for Accidents: Densetsu
    The first paragraph is good, as far as I know. Just one thing I'm not sure about ...
  • Kindar's Cure
    Before we begin, I gotta say this: I'm sleepy. So there may be some things here ...
  • Working From Home
    This could be the most clear entry I've ever read. I'm just to tired to actually ...
  • The Drink That Ends It
    "A second gulp leaves me with less air. I attempt to breathe but no air comes to ...
  • The Drink That Ends It
    It looks like a lot of people are having their characters die for this one. To m ...
  • I Have To Move On
    To get rid of the first "I verb," I'd have it as: "Your love for me has always b ...
  • I Have To Move On
    Switch up how you begin your paragraphs; five of them begin with "I verb."  "You ...
  • The Invite
    First off, I like your characters. They're all different from one another and un ...
  • hot tub love
    You have a few words left to use; I'd elaborate more on the memory. Bring us int ...
  • St. Jude
    "Pictures of her and her friends were stuck to" -- I think you could cut out the ...
  • St. Jude
    Mibba chat connection keeps making me mad.   "I turned it over, the patron saint ...
  • St. Jude
    If you want to, and then cut down on some words elsewhere?
  • St. Jude
    Ooh, collapsed, I like that one. I think that was the one I was trying to think ...
  • Chapter One
    General: "At thirty five he was six feet three inches of muscular hotness with a ...
  • The Ironic Papercut
    Oh, I read this one! I rated it, but didn't give any feedback, because I don't t ...
  • Mitza Victoria Durke
    Better! It all makes sense and strings together. However, I wouldn't yet give it ...
  • The Saddest Clown
    Awwww, that's so sad! Understatement, I know, but still.  Anyways, the only thin ...
  • Faucet Head
    The first sentence is a run-on.  Just a suggestion: instead of him reeking " lik ...
  • Being Bompsy Carleffa
    What are we to do if you're eaten by a bear?  The first phrase I think is worded ...
  • 64. Day 64
    our cat landed on my head, and knocked off the enormous carton of orange juice t ...
  • 13. Day 13
    So far, so good. Just one question: Can all that actually fit on a post-it? Or d ...
  • 2. Questions
    General: Some parts of the first paragraph sound a little choppy. I suggest: "Im ...
  • 3. Chapter 3- Catching Up
    General: "This (was) definitely saying something, as Demetrius (was) overjoyed t ...
  • 3. Chapter 3- Catching Up
    "Demetrius and I drifted towards each other, so that we could walk side by side" ...
  • Page 1
    I like the idea so far. It's fresh. My only suggestion would be to add more deta ...
  • Feel
    General: "Janie breathed in deeply as she sat in Jake(apostrophe)s arms"  "H eto ...
  • 1.
    "before I was being questioned by this guy." -- I think "before this guy started ...
  • Chapter 2: Working Alone
    General:  "most-secretly" In the space you have this, I don't think you wanted t ...
  • Company Man
    General: Wow. Lemme just say, I love the opening. It's very original - how many ...
  • 1. Prologue
    You have "Prologue" spelt right on the link to the left, but not in the text abo ...
  • Chapter One - Demons Rise
    General: Hmmm...I'm just gonna go nuts. I'm saying write now, this story is very ...
  • Preface (Revise v2)
    "I needed to run(space)away before I hurt someone I loved"   ""What should I tak ...
  • The Accident
    At the very beginning, before the ***... What's happening? Who are the character ...
  • Prologue
    Found this on the feedback forum! ^_^  It might just be me, but I think the desc ...
  • Fifteen
    "If his intentions were wrong in the beginning, (wouldn't) it only matter how th ...
  • 2. Chapter 2- Uninvited
    General: " Besides the fact that they usually grimaced at the kinds of food I pr ...
  • 1. Chapter 1- Hello, My Name Is...
    "Tabor and I took a momentary detour to out lockers" -- to out?  Louis Stoker - ...
  • 1. Chapter 1- Hello, My Name Is...
    oh! I didn't read more, but I just though of this - when Demetrius is elbowing h ...
  • Along Came the Walker
    "The deeps scar on my leg was the only indicator he had suffered a traumatic inj ...
  • Power Outage
    "I chuckled darkly to myself" --teehee, I chuckled darkly with her.  Hahahaha! I ...
  • Fourteen
    General: Teehee. The heated argument between Grace and Dolly sounds like it was ...
  • Chapter One: The Beginning
    Teehee. I like the interaction between Rebecca and Mr. Ashton at the beginning. ...
  • Know When To Hold Em (Part One)
    Am I lyin or am I dyin? (quotation mark) He looked around the
  • Know When To Hold Em (Part One)
    11808 words? I didn't read it yet, but...that's over 40 or 50 pages, isn't it? A ...
  • Know When To Hold Em (Part One)
    Excellent description of The Place! It paints a realistic image in my mind.  "le ...
  • 1.
    Hi! Saw your post on the feedback forum.  I didn't finish reading this yet - jus ...
  • Chuggin' Along
    General: When you say what she's wearing, it sounds kind of out of place. If you ...
  • Chuggin' Along
    I think you can say in the very first sentence that it was snowing. "Snow fell q ...
  • Prologue
    ...Huh. I wonder what they wanted. If this is supposed to be a mystery for now, ...
  • Twelve
    "Every(space)day faded into the other"  "Having something constant every(space)d ...
  • Eleven
    Better... I think the shock should last a little bit longer, though. Really elab ...
  • No Understanding
    Wow... I like the message. And can relate. Some people just can't grasp the fact ...
  • Eleven
    "He rose from the floor (COMMA) grasping my hand for a moment (PERIOD. Then he) ...
  • Ten
    General: "My father lie on" - "lie" should either be "laid" or "lied," I forget ...
  • Three
    Teeheehee. You can have a lot of fun with sections in which the main character i ...
  • Seven
    Teehee. I like the growl in the first paragraph.  I think Gracie's mother should ...
  • Two
    Aww, this was so adorable!!! I love love at first sight!  I agree, though, that ...
  • Lullaby
    I think it's perfect just the way it is! With one exception: the last line's "yo ...
  • Three
    "He picked me up one afternoon and drove through the country pulling into a fie ...
  • Izzy
    Ooh...the dark-side of the robot...interesting...  The thing between Izzy and Ja ...
  • Chapter 3
    “Wait until we get to the castle.”  “Fine.” -- Jacob seems a bit too...lenient, ...
  • Chapter 2
    In the first paragraph, comma after roar. Later in the paragraph, the creature's ...
  • Chapter Five
    General: "To prove to myself that I'm being a baby I unlock the back door and lo ...
  • Prologue
    I don't think this would count as a prologue - this seems more like the things y ...
  • Chapter Four
    The whole first paragraph is...very big. Try dividing it into three separate one ...
  • Morvina (Structure Revision 11-6-09)
    General: "laying here on this hard wood like cot" -- try "wood-like"  "It’s late ...
  • Isolation.(editied)
    "The lights in my room where bright" -- should be "were bright." Ctrl F and put ...
  • Chapter 2 (Rough)
    General: " Laughter echoed through the silent house. Not the type you hear from ...
  • Chapter 1 (Second Draft)
    Beware of "ice blue." When the same awesome adjective is used more than once, it ...
  • Preface (Second Draft)
    General: "The agreement stated in plan terms" --was this word meant to be plan, ...