I liked "On top of the splendid paper, it was wrapped in a pink little bow that ...
Nice ending. Somehow, I feel you may have got that teeny weeny impatient (like I ...
Nicely done. You took too much liberty on the word count. But hey, You got me re ...
A New Gal in Town
I took a few reads to get this scene into my head. Liked it. "The government wor ...
Challenge 26 On the wrong Track
Nice. Brought the Melbourne Cup in nicely.
Never Leave Your Dog Alone
Very nicely described. Just to nit pick, I suppose "went to church" assumes Sund ...
Whispered Memories - 22nd Challenge
Nice. Very poetic.