JELLIOTT111's Compliments

Compliments:  47

Last Compliment: 8/10/2011

Brilliant (10)

Project Reviews

  • Quotes(:
    One fine day in the middle of the night,  Two dead boys got up to fight,  Back ...
  • Quotes(:
    "To see the world in a grain of sand, And the Heavens in a fild flower.  To ho ...

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Motivating (7)

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In-depth (10)

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  • Dying back - {1/3}
    As snapjack has said down below, the story does seem a bit too fast paced. I lik ...
  • Prologue
    In general, the writing idea is catchy and obviously makes the reader think abou ...
  • Chapter 1
    There are certain things that you do in this text that excel over other things. ...
Unique (4)

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  • The Hidden
    General: I think that the little part of the story you have given away is very g ...

Submission Reviews

  • Prologue
    This is a fantastic prologue to a book and the imagination is throoughly capture ...
  • Chapter 2
    Oh yeah and i was going to congratulate you on how weird you have made Robert. H ...
Enlightening (10)

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  • <><><><>
    I know there isn't much to comment on but the quotes are relevant and thought pr ...
  • Confession of a Band Vocalist
    Just a couple of nit picky points first:  "my happiness melted and turned into ...
Helpful (6)

Submission Reviews

  • The Perfect Student
    Jesus. It's like the tension of a whole story crammed into under one thousand wo ...
  • Chapter 2
    This is up to the three stars. Its fantastic and i can properly imagine what thi ...
  • Chapter One
    Love the beginning and I want to know more. Your character Scott reminds me a li ...