JELLIOTT111's Compliments

Compliments:  10

Last Compliment: 8/1/2011

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Submission Reviews

  • Dying back - {1/3}
    As snapjack has said down below, the story does seem a bit too fast paced. I lik ...
  • Prologue
    In general, the writing idea is catchy and obviously makes the reader think abou ...
  • Chapter 1
    There are certain things that you do in this text that excel over other things. ...

  • The concept and the idea that you have created is extremely interesting and thou ...
  • Scene I: God Greets Maxwell
    First of all, I've got to say that this is a brilliant piece of writing which is ...
  • Chapter 1
    "across a stage Herbert laid" Is there meant to be a full stop after stage? Or ...
  • Chapter 1
    General: I like how you write, I have the same sort of technique, it is very met ...
  • Grendel's Eye
    General: You seem to definatly know what you are talking about. You know your st ...
  • Discoveries
    This is fluent and easy to read and not being a poetry expert i think you've wri ...
  • The Loss
    General: I think in the first paragraph, subtely introduce the character Debra H ...