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Last Compliment: 11/12/2017

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  • Belle
    Fantastically wicked! I was entertained all the way through this story, love the ...
  • Not Safe For Wayfarers
    Touching at a level out of this world.  Can't help but to love Anja, because she ...
  • Traditions
    Excellent! Not afraid to write an amazing story with great characters and dialog ...
  • Wardrobe Shaped Boxes
    I enjoyed the implied analogy between the emptied mind of the character and the ...
  • For the Man Who Has Everything
    Witty and perfectly displaying the despair of the genie.  I suffered along with ...
  • DEAD CATS
    Definitely staying tuned.....I sense hypercube-ultradimensional-cat-in-schroding ...
  • The World (an autistic view)
    The poem gained power for me after your explanation in the feedback.  I believe ...
  • Tea for Two?
    General: Naughty naughty, but with a great insight into a complex dynamics betwe ...
  • Mourning Bath
    Excellent.  This a perfect "Oh Shit" story in that the young, horny characters, ...
  • Trials & Tribulations
    What a strong a vivid start.  The opening line engages the reader in the act of ...
  • On the Way to Easter Mass
    Awesome! This poem/story is filled with Easter imagery of color and shapes.  The ...
  • Life
    A great lesson on survival, bringing the reader eye to eye with the perseverance ...
  • Please call them ruby, ruby red
    Very interesting read.  The tone is humorous and easy to relate to, in particula ...
  • BEYOND
    No problem pattimari.  You should check out two of Georgehoward's poems in the p ...
  • A delightful party
    Very creative use of the leader and follower archetypes.  The setting is fantast ...
  • The Shadow Gate (Horror)
    This short piece focuses mainly on covering the required archetypes, but it is m ...
  • Undercover Exploits.
    Pretty dynamic story, filled with anger, co-dependency, and even a bit of madnes ...
  • Who Loves Me Better?
    Very subtle use of the archetypes, which is a very hard thing to do successfully ...
  • the Snow Queen's Reason
    Very nicely done.  I thought the headings indicating the archetypes would interr ...
  • The Rain of Life
    Here you give us an interpretation of why Tom Waits wanted it to rain.  You give ...
  • A Girl
    I liked the interpretation of the poem, the child growing beautiful like nature ...
  • In Awe of Paul Revere - 1775
    Great way of telling the story in the eyes of a young boy, one like many that mu ...
  • Sleight of Heart
    I know.  Titles could be a challenge.  This one is not catchy enough......The fi ...
  • 'Prufrock Among The Women'
    And by the way, thanks for including a link to the reference poem and adding a t ...
  • I Wrote A Song
    Very strong stuff.  I wasn't sure about the disclaimer but maybe it is suitable. ...
  • Dear Diary............January 22nd 2046
    A complex but creative way of presenting the views of many survivors in one stor ...
  • The List
    It's a bit weak, more like what you would read in a health magazine.  The paragr ...
  • Snapped
    Congratulations.  There is a lot of the familiar here, the everyday things that ...
  • You Don't Want To Leave It Behind
    Absolutely original and intriguing.  The description and detail are excellent. ...
  • A Father Remembered
    Excellent.  I like the way it's written, which brings to mind image after image ...
  • Mikey's Wish
    Very nice and touching story.  Kinda like a child's wish come true.  I like the ...
  • Head Freeze
    One more reason for me not to ride the bus.  Amazing how she got away with it fo ...
  • Chapter 1
    I see Jacquelini as a great opportunity for you to develop a character, but what ...
  • Home Sick - 19th Challenge
    Nice perspective from the other side.  So we are the aliens after all!  Not the ...
  • WONDERFUL WORLD
    A beautiful journey through the birth and death of a glorious day.  The poem is ...
  • Forevermore
    Nice, long piece.  It's a good way of telling a story, with suspense and all, an ...
  • The Cursed Visionary
    I like the image of the waves "eroding what I should be" in the third stanza. ...
  • Hope is a Joke
    There is a little more depth in this poem, compared to the other, a little more ...
  • Beyond Existence
    There is a lot of emotion hidden in this piece, and yet it does not come across ...
  • Porcelain
    Actually not bad at all, although it sounds like it's taken right out of a borin ...
  • Phone Etiquette
    Cheesy and impulsive, yet.  But the worst of poetry? Almost!
  • charmed, i'm sure.
    Charming and witty.  There are some very endearing verses like "never mind the f ...
  • A Bird
    This is a beautiful poem but like others I've read here, it just appears to be a ...
  • Love From A Distance
    Poetic Princess: in the first line of my comment below I meant to type "fact" no ...
  • Listen
    Second to last line "Listen to sound..." maybe missing a "the"?  This one is not ...
  • The keeper
    The last two lines are the strongest.  Make sure to proof-read and watch the com ...
  • Desire
    Spelling: "out sanding" --> "outstanding" "its like the night" ---> it's like t ...
  • Kill me with your love
    Spelling "Your so gentle" ---> "You're so gentle."  To me the two lines that hav ...
  • Black and White
    Out of all your other poems in this project, this one has a little more meat to ...
  • Hold on
    Simple and to the point.  Perhaps too simple for my taste but nonetheless shows ...
  • Don't Be Sad, Be Glad
    Overall a simple but heartfelt poem, with subtle rhymes, and and urban feeling t ...
  • Silent Prayer
    TheUnholyDragon: to clarify, in my comment when I say  "the first sentence is to ...
  • Blue Hyacinth
    I like the open style and can feel the ideas and feeling pouring freely from you ...
  • For the Moment
    Awesome.  Here you demand attention and you get it, making the reader listen.  N ...
  • Game of death
    Yes, I dare!.  This sums up the desire for that ultimate, eternal sleep.  Honest ...
  • Mask
    Powerful concept, and of course, many people live their life behind a mask.  Not ...