Josafat's Compliments

Compliments:  53

Last Compliment: 11/26/2017

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Submission Reviews

  • Got No Heat at Home
    Nice to see a different form of writing here, especially a song!  Well done. :)
  • The Wrong House
    General: Definitely a scary one! I like the palpable madness in Lia: bitch is cr ...
  • Brady be damned
    It was only toward the end that the true identity of the object becomes apparent ...
  • Gettysburg Witness
    General: I appreciate the sentiment the woman shows toward the supernatural expe ...
  • You can choose how this will end...
    Darn, I missed this Aubrie.  I just came back from a business trip that drained ...
  • I, of the Shadow People
    This is a magical piece.  The shadow is endearing in his love for Luna, and the ...
  • The Surge
    Congratulations!  Great job.
  • Old Faithful
    A beautiful piece.  Nicely divided in that it takes place in two days in which t ...
  • 0
    An excellent contemplative piece that comments on the passage of time and the wo ...
  • 0
    Another beautiful poem about being broken, hurt in ways that bring you down to t ...
  • 0
    Sorry I posted twice, my computer froze and I thought the first one had not post ...

  • I agree with Winterjazz, in that you provide enough clues of the message of some ...
  • 0
    A gratifying portal to a magic childhood in a foreign land, which is quickly est ...
  • Solitude
    Exactly the place I need to go to when life's turmoil brings me down.  Congratul ...
  • She wept
    Lovely!  Congratulations!  "She Wept" is like a prayer.
  • The Reading
    Mystical and mysterious, filled with metaphors and almost like a type of incanta ...
  • Still Alive
    There is a nice repetition of phrases, especially when the tables turn and he wi ...
  • Look Into My Eyes
    Dramatic opening line, and the fact that it's repeated makes it echo in one's ea ...
  • Just writing this made me feel dirty
    A bad piece of self-pitied and boring poetry.  Not the worst, but almost there.
  • Things
    Yuk!
  • A teenage girl's lament
    Pretty bad stuff.  Is this the same whiny bitch of "Youll be sory"?  She still a ...
  • Dont Hate on Me!!
    HATE this CRAP!
  • Spelling Bee: The Unfolding of Psycho
    tear in my eye....
  • Sea Slug
    This one is medium-rare.  Not quite rotten!
  • The game
    I thinks this is witty and playful.  Not a bad one.  What a game indeed.
  • What I Think About That...
    I agree.  It is like music to my ears....well, not quite, but not the god-awful ...
  • Love Vampire
    I agree with Kelian about "pink fang" but also bringing French into it earned it ...
  • Teenage Angst
    awful indeed.
  • Brudda
    Hmmm...not sure, I think I heard this one on the radio before!
  • Barfing
    I won't mind the carrots. I love orange puke!
  • ode to the lizard man
    There is a code behind this one, so therefore, still a valid poem.  I am in love ...
  • I Hunt the Moon
    Nope! You need to do worse than this.  Some drunk fifth graders could still find ...
  • Invasion!
    This is just fucking hilarious!  Did you keep a straight face when you wrote thi ...
  • Bunny Slipper Feets
    Would someone kill that fucking bunny?  This does rate low for me: annoying, rid ...
  • Disease
    Wonderfully written!  I like the rhyming, which have an edge to them as they are ...
  • In Memory Of Our Grasshopper (June 5th 2009)
    This piece is beautiful like a prayer thanks to repetition and the devotion that ...
  • Waiting There
    The poem takes you deep into a path of darkness and shared tragedy.  There is pa ...
  • As the town hears the melody
    You have some nice images at work here, especially in the personalization of thi ...
  • Glass Boy
    Many thoughts come to my mind as to why the speaker is motivated to "live" with ...
  • Broken Mirror
    It seems you play with the idea of parallel universes and I think it works well. ...
  • no trigger
    Excellent!  This reaches to my core.  The ambivalence of feelings, the taste for ...
  • Testimonials
    Great way to approach aspects of God many don't dare think about.  The part abou ...
  • My Intake of Air
    This is hypnotizing, like a mantra.  I love to read it over and over.  There is ...
  • Not Helping
    I love the parallel the speaker makes between this love and the cigarrettes, the ...
  • Clowns
    I fear them too, and this because of a close encounter with one at a circus when ...
  • Child's Play
    The haunting death-dream of a child?  Interesting piece, filled with hope for th ...
  • Why Write
    Yes! Writing is why we are all here, and in the end it's truly a journey of bein ...
  • blessed
    Interesting use of punctuation, pausing before what sounds like the key of your ...
  • Life's Accomplishments
    If only we had 1000 years to live.....
  • Misunderstood
    And indeed most creative people are misunderstood....
  • Writing Buddies
    This story puts me right in the present, what's happening right now, inspiring m ...
  • The Dragon and the Lion
    This is alluding to mythology or legends I am not familiar with, but it's full o ...
  • How Do You Feel?
    A few notes: My gut reaction when first read: It makes me look forward to good ...