LilyFramboise's Compliments

Compliments:  56

Last Compliment: 9/21/2017

Brilliant (56)

Submission Reviews

  • Taste of the Faerie's Banquet
    Oh wow.   Ok first off, I'm not good with lots of big words, it'a why I wrote fo ...
  • Last Date
    When love turns sour eh?  I immediately thought of Passengers, and then fantasis ...
  • Posh Nosh
    oh yeah, yeah, yeah, I forgot, you're great at dialogue!!!
  • Posh Nosh
    This is genius and I had NO idea!   “I look like a knobhead, in a knobby dress, ...
  • A Slice of Life
    i'm too late to be helpful this month - sorry - but here's what hits me.  The ra ...
  • Time's Justice
    So perfectly crafted was this piece, I felt as if I knew where it were going bef ...
  • Illusion of an Evolution
    I still maintain that it's a woman's choice and right to reveal what she likes o ...
  • Prologue
    I'm going light Alec in the same vein as the original piece - remember how she w ...
  • The Distance
    Isn't it funny how something so simple can be so powerful?  There is a gap here ...
  • Closure
    It's refreshing to see love explored from a male perspective.  Your writing is g ...
  • Tanganyika
    Lol you're welcome! Grave spinning is my speciality tee hee
  • Tanganyika
    Dave!! PML! Superb Kitty :-)
  • Honey
    Hi lovely - the word count aside, there were elements of this meandering tale i ...
  • It started with a kiss
    I love a bracket!
  • The Compellor Complex
    Oh wow - this is clever - your brain definitely works on a more sophisticated le ...
  • Dear Olive
    I'm not sure what to make of this - I really like the idea of communicating the ...
  • I don't know you
    Also this line:   "He felt foolish of the gold neckless..."  It's necklace and " ...
  • I don't know you
    Yes I too would have a shot ricochet of something a couple of something a couple ...
  • Their Love Eyes
    I enjoyed the journey you take me on with each of your children and love the fac ...
  • A Constant State of Love
    "Exposed his pastry" *sniggers -- great line   Very clever piece of writing and ...
  • Destiny's Plaything
    Ooh it's like Carry on Over the Scrabbleboard of Thrones!  I love it - in all ho ...
  • Red
    Same issues as the others aside ( the litle girl at the end confused me for the ...
  • The Book
    All good comments and cover a lot of ground I wanted to touch on - serves me rig ...
  • The Jimmys
    Fucking great!!    "Dude, seriously, you need to fuck off." Best line ever but r ...
  • The Parore
    What a wonderfully skilful way you have told this story - beautiful links betwee ...
  • Trigger
    Lou I think you've done a great job with this and I don't agree with Duncan; I t ...
  • Melted
    I wholeheartedly agree with a lot of the other comments here: this would make a ...
  • Playing House
    Ok this story grabbed me from the off - I live a story told in this way and this ...
  • Gift
    I've reread this and I really like it: stylish, thoughtful and well crafted.  Ni ...
  • THE SUM OF ALL THINGS UNEQUAL
    I have questions about who the old lady really is too, but I have more about why ...
  • Merchandise
    Just gorgeous. And glorious.  Beautiful structure, pace and detail.  I love it.
  • Last present.
    There is some cracking imagery here, and I love the intro with the hatchet and t ...
  • Bang
    Oh dear should I be laughing at the last line - lol  So is Jeff his brother? I'm ...
  • Francine
    Best thing you've ever written mate!  It unfurled so slowly, it was as if it was ...
  • Hex Nihilo
    This is absolutely superb mate. A class act!  Coincidentally I went to see Dr St ...
  • TIME_AND_PLACE
    I like the way the story reads but I too have the burning need to know if Church ...
  • Floaters (Revised)
    Oh, way, way, way better - really flows, with some wit too now, and the end, *sh ...
  • From Ghoulies and Ghosties...
    Oh yes good job, definitely goosebumps and hairs rising here. Oooh, shuddering a ...
  • The Wrong House
    It's good... actually creeped me out, knowing something was coming but not sure ...
  • The Man in the Monitor
    Ha ha rant much? Scared now!
  • Floaters (Revised)
    Ooooh, creepy - I get floaters in my eye ALL the time!! Argh!  Yeah, I get what ...
  • Caverns of the Night
    Bloody loved it, the piss take and everythnig.  Why I was grinning to myself whi ...
  • Clockwork Conversation
    this drew me in from the start and I read the entire tale with a sense of wonder ...
  • Them Earthies
    Yup, I don't care how and why cos I love it. Period. Great fun and I enjoyed mee ...
  • The Last American Gunslingers
    Ooh I like it and didn't see the twist coming.     “If that’s what it takes. And ...
  • Forgiveness
    Oh this is a very clever piece of writing - love the concept and the dialogue ju ...
  • Nevermind
    Love it. LOVE it!!  You know when there's one of those facebook posts where the ...
  • Unto the Breach...
    Love this. Love, love, love it!  Please write action fairy stories for grown ups ...
  • Uprising
    Oh this is so clever and witty. I'm impressed at your skill level, creativity an ...
  • Burden of Command
    Although there is no doubt in my mind that your writing is of an extermely high ...
  • Eliza
    Wow!  Wow.  Richard, I love this. At first I wasn't sure about it and to be hone ...
  • REVISED EXCERPT - IMPERFECT HUMAN HEART
    Wow. Fierce, dramatic and powerful.  Not my cup of tea at all but maybe that's m ...
  • IMPERFECT HUMAN HEART
    Hi Devi  I actually enjoyed this period piece despite my initial reservations ab ...
  • The Forge - my ocean
    Ah good, in which case the fact I was partly motivated by these references to as ...
  • Who can really say?
    I enjoyed the language and felt it enhanced the telling of the folklore which fe ...
  • Cara's Tale
    This is breathtakingly beautiful and I feel like it's folklore that does or migh ...