LilyFramboise's Compliments

Compliments:  33

Last Compliment: 9/18/2017

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Submission Reviews

  • Crystal
    Brilliant Tony - I applaud this amusing, banter filled pornfest/murder mystery - ...
  • The Rising
    I have clearly benefited by coming in after you've tidied this piece Tony.  I fo ...
  • Where is HaShem?
    Such doom and gloom, reflected in the pace and terminology, and distinctive desc ...
  • Into the Forest
    This was reminiscent of the best fantasy and fairy tales yarns out there and I t ...
  • Sex Appeal
    I am that cockroach *hides face in shame and burns magazines  Great story - it i ...
  • Puppies with Wings,  finished
    Aw I feel really sad now
  • It started with a kiss
    Absolutely loved it - you have a knack for weaving a humorous tale - well done! ...

  • Good effort here and I like the sentiment in the poem but as Alec said there are ...
  • Nearly Departed
    OK so I'm not as sharp as Chris and whoah, I didn't see the end coming so it was ...
  • Rewritten Fate
    I'm going to keep this brief as I'm probably not entering this month and therefo ...
  • Until the Darkness is Gone
    Enjoyed that! I agree: very Jonny Cash!!
  • The Taste of Grapes
    This story feels like it unfolds with a natural progression and I love how we en ...
  • A Damn Mess
    Witty, clever and entertaining and nicely written.  This: "She’ll have anxiety i ...
  • Be There Soon
    Yes, maybe by changing the account into a few more streams of consciousness you ...
  • Lefu
    Yes better, although I think rereading with an open mind and renewed confidence ...
  • Praying hands
    No, no I did sympathise but then questioned my judgment when he killed the bubba ...
  • Lefu
    I do agree with Alec  Fixate - maybe try focus Wary serenity - this doesn't work ...
  • Ascension
    The nouniying of adjectives I applaud, especially in your use of it here.  I ado ...
  • Juniper - Edited(Final Draft}
    Oh, one thing I forgot. If I woke up and found out my child had been murdered my ...
  • The Man in the Monitor
    Loved it - hilarious, witty original.  Got the right hump I never made it into y ...
  • The Piper
    OMFG I literally have goosebumps all over my body. What a superbly executed piec ...
  • Casino Ad Val
    Yep nice, amusing, entertaining even, and good concept although I think with a s ...
  • Wings Of Our Mind
    Hi Louisa  I do like this, it's sweet and endearing but I feel that the simplici ...
  • Restorations
    Refreshing, Duncan, that was the word that sprung to mind while reading this yes ...
  • Captain Who?
    Writing not reading lol - sorry
  • The Divide
    Maybe it's just this subject matter but I'm not finding these easy to read. Real ...
  • Breathe Deep
    Sometimes we find the beauty in what's not said as much as what is.  I too strug ...
  • What's A King Who Has No Peasants?
    Ok, So where do I get one of these MMs then?  Really like the interplay between ...
  • The Price of Freedom
    I love this piece and like Neil I could feel the sand under my fingernails and t ...
  • It is a bloke's life.
    I enjoyed reading this but agree that it doesn't seem to me - and what do I know ...
  • Granada
    I adore this. I feel as if you have created a thread of intimacy between Zami an ...
  • The Forge - my ocean
    Hi Tony, I like the simplicity of this piece but I'm unsure about the change of ...
  • Pebble (Try Number Two)
    I absolutely bloody love it! Hilarious and brilliant!