LilyFramboise's Compliments

Compliments:  37

Last Compliment: 10/29/2017

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Submission Reviews

  • Mental Klinikiphobia
    Interesting read and I liked t. Few comments:  "but no one knew it was due to hi ...
  • Anterograde
    This was a gritty piece and as soon as you mentioned ketamine I just knew it was ...
  • Hmm...
    Hi Icon  I like what you're doing here and having read it a week or so ago, I'm ...
  • Crystal
    Really good job Tony - perfect pruning - runs effortlessly now. Very smooth. I a ...
  • The Evacuee
    Aw I got goosebumps with this. There's something about children and homes and wa ...
  • Cosmium
    Great line: "Before it all began, it was who she was." Ooh that's deep and I lov ...
  • Peaceful atom
    I really like the subject matter here but feel like it needs some restructuring ...
  • Unfortunate bunch
    Being not a gamer AT ALL, I didn't think this was the case BUT I expected it was ...
  • Zippo
    Like the boys, had to reread a couple of times - I think this has real potential ...
  • Operation FSB
    Oh that's a rip-roaring yarn - very funny - I was chuckling along to this.  Coup ...
  • Divine Intervention?
    Superb effort Kittycat - really enjoyed the way this panned out and didn't see t ...
  • Tanganyika
    I think as usual you have executed a sharp delivery but I'm going to fess up and ...
  • Fed up!
    Through your use of short, sharp sentences and choice of language you craft an e ...
  • Can't Love you Any More
    I love the melody of the line :"I can't love you anymore," and I could imagine i ...
  • A Day of All Days to Cherish
    Hi Sharon  While I enjoyed your little reminiscences I agree with some of the ot ...
  • Christmas Beginnings
    I really loved the magic interwoven in the very essence of this piece.  It unfol ...
  • Hope
    Just not sure on this - it meanders quite a lot doesn't it?
  • Rude-dolph
    This was like lemon mousse - light, sweet, no nutritional content but pleasant t ...
  • Traditions
    Yes I like the e-cig too  This piece reads well and I like the use of the dialog ...
  • Nothing
    It's great - I love everything about it.  Wouldn't change a thing except I wonde ...
  • Prime
    Yes like Tony I got a bit confused too.  I didn't not enjoy it - and it is very ...
  • Among Gods
    Brilliant job and I love the conversations.  "That will be a more entertaining g ...

  • A bit of light-hearted fun - it was nice. Didn't move me but I appreciated the t ...
  • Poison Creek
    *sobs* I don't like it, I'm scared.  This genuinely freaked me out and I'm so do ...
  • The Piper
    Nope, still goosebumps on second reading!  "A blackness that was somehow darker ...
  • Marauding Gangs of Children Doing Bad
    Well I found it entertaining in a sick kind of car crash way - gruesome and stom ...
  • The soldier
    Something about this left me empty but I'm not sure why. I think the dialogue wa ...
  • Camelling
    You have surpassed yourself here: an awesome piece of writing.   One thing: "It’ ...
  • Super Heroes
    Yes, yes I'm connecting with it now - much more soap opera less infomercial. Way ...
  • Super Heroes
    “This is not the fuckin Navy, Crockett!  Do you see any freakin’ water around he ...
  • The Painter
    I think this is superb and love the ending but as Chris pointed out the "pronoun ...
  • A Scientific Anomaly
    just seen the other comments - guess I'm not alone
  • A Scientific Anomaly
    Edrick I like this a lot but like one of the other stories I feel like the story ...
  • The Old Man's Story
    I was left with a lot of questions and maybe that's a good thing? What was the c ...
  • The Last Couple
    I think it's a perfect vignette, magnified on the action, emotion and atmosphere ...
  • Last Dance
    Ha ha war poet, clever!   I like it a lot and it's definitely a vignette.  I thi ...
  • Heavy Dirty Soul
    Hi SG, this piece of writing really drew me in, probably more than any of the ot ...