LouSweet's Compliments

Compliments:  8

Last Compliment: 7/20/2017

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Submission Reviews

  • The Evacuee
    Eddie pulled a few berries from the roadside bush, and offered them to David, be ...
  • Trial by Hak’enra.
    I feel so bad that I didn't enjoy this. It felt all alien to me and it's not th ...
  • The Distance
    I feel sad and unsettled after reading this. I enjoyed how simple and genuine th ...
  • Chapter 1
    I like the opening sentences. It entices the reader to find out who and why is t ...
  • Chapter 1
    In the spring it was time for wool, herding the sheep and bringing in the lambs. ...
  • Chapter 1
    The heat bore me to the ground, and my clothes caught fire.  It hurt very littl ...
  • Poison Creek
    What the hell, Ken? Really?  How do you top your previous work?  This was fright ...
  • The Piper
    Good to be back. :)   During the day he slept in the sunlight from the room's si ...