LouSweet's Compliments

Compliments:  13

Last Compliment: 8/18/2017

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Submission Reviews

  • The Taking of the Marquee
    Oooh, I really enjoyed this. I was swept from the first line. Great style!  Also ...
  • Tasty Morsels
    Mum and Dad could hear her laughter as I sniggering, held the receiver away from ...
  • chapter 3: a long road, part 4
    BOOM. I read your story without soundtracks, it doesn't need any. The voice and ...
  • Group Therapy
    Wow...I don't know what to say except that I just felt how it feels like to be i ...
  • Price of forgiveness
    Great revisions. A definite contender.    Tiny nitpick for better flow.  The dir ...
  • The Evacuee
    Eddie pulled a few berries from the roadside bush, and offered them to David, be ...
  • Trial by Hak’enra.
    I feel so bad that I didn't enjoy this. It felt all alien to me and it's not th ...
  • The Distance
    I feel sad and unsettled after reading this. I enjoyed how simple and genuine th ...
  • Chapter 1
    I like the opening sentences. It entices the reader to find out who and why is t ...
  • Chapter 1
    In the spring it was time for wool, herding the sheep and bringing in the lambs. ...
  • Chapter 1
    The heat bore me to the ground, and my clothes caught fire.  It hurt very littl ...
  • Poison Creek
    What the hell, Ken? Really?  How do you top your previous work?  This was fright ...
  • The Piper
    Good to be back. :)   During the day he slept in the sunlight from the room's si ...