LouisJHarris's Compliments

Compliments:  10

Last Compliment: 7/29/2014

Helpful (2)

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  • 7 Days
    Plot: Any romantic plot should have strong characters and the reader's empathy f ...
  • Another side
    General: The first paragraph of the prologue is intriguing, and that's because y ...
Motivating (2)

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  • There's No Time
    An interesting subject.  The hook is evident right from the start and that is a ...

Submission Reviews

  • Joy
    General: Absolutely adorable. No, wait. I shouldn't be using such adjectives.  T ...
Brilliant (3)

Submission Reviews

  • Chapter 2
    I don, t think you are rushing into plot at all. And I don't understand how othe ...
  • Chapter 2
    You really do have the gift.  This is a prizewinner of a chapter and I would loo ...
  • A Prologue by Larisa (REVISED)
    General: The Hook...I was lost and alone.  Excellent start.  Drew me in and sudd ...
Enlightening (2)

Submission Reviews

  • Chapter 1
    Remember this?  "To be completely honest, I can't say that I know a whole lot ab ...
  • Chapter 3
    General: Cool action scene.  The suspense is heart stopping, but as I said earli ...
In-depth (1)

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