Nicely articulated. Short and snappy without a second adverb or adjective in si ...
The Innocents' Wonder
This beautiful. Your friend certainly has the talent.
Chapter One: Ashes in the Sky
Loving this. I'm a sucker for the watchers and the archs. This is fabulous. T ...
This version clearly lets the reader know that this girl is suffering inside (in ...
The Show Must Go On
So, that's where I've been going wrong. It's 63 seconds to get the boys whites ...
So, Death has a sense of humour! The land of folklore, fairytale and myth brough ...
Black Hole Sun - Soundgarden
Released in 1994, it spent seven weeks at No. 1. A work of genius written in 15 ...
Will I ever find out?
Nothing like loosening the shackles with a breach of the speed limit. Wishing y ...
2.) True Love
The story design is taking shape but I agree that the pace is rapid. But hey - ...
Searching For Myself
Always the best option - let go and find who you are. See each day as a new beg ...
This is a great idea Dawn (+ Misunderstood). I love the visuals - it's alway ea ...
1.) So, Dawn is back
A good plot evolving here. My only mention would be on character development an ...
There is potential for a good story here. Aimed at teens I imagine? The sweari ...