Moana_Brantwood's Compliments

Compliments:  13

Last Compliment: 11/2/2010

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Submission Reviews

  • The Pitch
    Nicely articulated.  Short and snappy without a second adverb or adjective in si ...
  • The Innocents' Wonder
    This beautiful.  Your friend certainly has the talent.
  • Chapter One: Ashes in the Sky
    Loving this.  I'm a sucker for the watchers and the archs.  This is fabulous.  T ...
  • Deadly Thursday
    This version clearly lets the reader know that this girl is suffering inside (in ...
  • The Show Must Go On
    So, that's where I've been going wrong.  It's 63 seconds to get the boys whites ...
  • Last Laugh
    So, Death has a sense of humour! The land of folklore, fairytale and myth brough ...
  • Black Hole Sun - Soundgarden
    Released in 1994, it spent seven weeks at No. 1.  A work of genius written in 15 ...
  • Will I ever find out?
    Nothing like loosening the shackles with a breach of the speed limit.  Wishing y ...
  • 2.) True Love
    The story design is taking shape but I agree that the pace is rapid.  But hey - ...
  • Searching For Myself
    Always the best option - let go and find who you are.  See each day as a new beg ...
  • Ritika
    This is a great idea Dawn (+ Misunderstood).  I love the visuals - it's alway ea ...
  • 1.) So, Dawn is back
    A good plot evolving here.  My only mention would be on character development an ...
  • Sisters
    There is potential for a good story here.  Aimed at teens I imagine?  The sweari ...