OpheliaWrites's Compliments

Compliments:  23

Last Compliment: 2/12/2014

Brilliant (23)

Project Reviews

  • Drift
    Much better teaser than the sequel. The writing could be a bit tighter, but on t ...
  • Shattered Blade
    Ahh, I see you've changed the title. I second the "hmm" but also say hooray that ...

Submission Reviews

  • The Voice
    Beautiful imagery and language though I found the overuse of proper names and pl ...
  • The Death of Mary Mjöll
    EXCELLENT! Who cares what webook says, I declare the squirrel the winner!!
  • Mere Pawns
    Excellent!  Authentic dialogue and intriguing mystery. Very well-written. But ...
  • Tartarus
    Excellent title, captured my interets immediately. Incredible imagery.  Typos: ...
  • The Edge - Chapter One
    General: Great imagery-- thrilling beginning but the mechanics need tightening. ...
  • The Cult Agenda
    Wow! Great piece and powerful images. Couple of nit-picky things so you can win ...
  • Chapter V: After Dark
    I'm not leaving lengthy comments because I'm anxious to get to the next chapter!
  • Chapter III: Bound and Tied
    General: Mesmerizing....  Just for the record, I am a Bible-believing person a ...
  • Chapter II: Cornered
    General: Wow! Did I say that already?  (again, several typos but I was so inte ...
  • The Turtle
    This has potential but I can't really speak to steampunk since I have no idea wh ...
  • Artinoeh
    Interesting. Read it aloud and analyze your dialogue. Are those really the thing ...
  • Gabriel and the Dragon
    Very nice approach. Great imagery too. You might want to go back and edit. I cau ...
  • Stephen
    Great potential, but the writing needs to be a bit tighter. Nice work!
  • The Coroner's report
    The transition at the end seems too abrupt, otherwise it's a gem!
  • Chapter 2: An angel quizes me
    General: Much better flow. Several shining moments as well.  Plot: You did a gre ...
  • Infecting The Cure
    General: I really like the title. It had me expecting something different than w ...
  • Twilight
    General: Candace is right--- impressive vocab.  Form: This rhymes-- goody, goody ...
  • How about some bloody parameters?
    Thanks for the tutorial. :)
  • Prologue
    WOW. I don't even know where to begin except to say that I am amazed if you've n ...
  • Chapter 1
    Character Development: Sorry about that. I truly do know how to spell definitely ...
  • Chapter Two
    General: It seems like there are alot of words and punctuation marks missing. Fo ...