OpheliaWrites's Compliments

Compliments:  20

Last Compliment: 9/15/2011

Enlightening (20)

Submission Reviews

  • Explanation of the idea
    I clicked your link but it didn't seem to work. This is absolutely hilarious, wh ...
  • [Cover]
    Is this original art work??? Excellent...
  • Pseudo
    General: Overall, an alluring feel.  Structure: "...trying to <diagnose> everyth ...
  • 07 - Nathan
    This reads alot like a journal entry and it has numerous grammar/spelling mistak ...
  • I'll Kill A Dragon For You
    Please, not the proverbial cracking twig!
  • New:  Chapter 1 - Beginning
    Okay. I'm already lost and I feel like the writing is too much "tell" and not en ...
  • Hellhorse
    I felt like I was reading one of my son's Pokemon cards.  BTW, temperament is sp ...
  • Chapter Four (Revised)
    General: Okay, so this begins to answer my earlier question about Ras' story int ...
  • The Beast of Broadway
    Great potential, but it has a lot of distracting mistakes.  You repeat phrases ...
  • Day of Wrath.... and Ice Cubes
    AWESOME!!!!!!!!  Finally, something original and refreshingly funny. Thank you ...
  • Nightmare
    Again with the dripping saliva?  Potential with the nightmare sequence, just a ...
  • Popcorn stand?
    Have you read "Water for Elephants"? May be a good idea before you get too far i ...
  • Prologue
    General: I like the last sentence and the way it brings things around. All in al ...
  • Chapter 2- Weddings and Wizards Part 2 (7th Edit)
    General: Very nice chapter title.  Plot: As they reached the entrance doors, Kin ...
  • Chapter 1 Choke Lung (Published Version)
    General: Can we get a bit more setting at the beginning? I know she's in her roy ...
  • Create
    General: I wasn't wowed by it like some of the others, and I had this unexplaina ...
  • Breach
    General: So, help me understand. What's being breached?  Form: I don't know if t ...
  • Greyality
    General: The concept is intriguing, but the form is confusing.  Alot of great ...
  • Chapter One
    General: Careful, my friend. You sound like an enraged vegetarian.   Structure: ...
  • Model of Good Behavior
    General: Made me laugh, and I love that (also hard to do, by the way).  Tone/Voi ...