OpheliaWrites's Compliments

Compliments:  7

Last Compliment: 4/2/2011

In-depth (7)

Submission Reviews

  • Blow 'Im High
    Excellent though there are a few unintended spelling & grammar errors. Particula ...
  • CHAPTER ONE: SLEIGH
    General: Dialogue is your forte, along with character development. That being sa ...
  • Chapter 1: My love
    General: This is a very interesting idea, but a bit underdeveloped. I think the ...
  • Pwock
    around, like (twice), volcanic, high, same, each, momentarily, back  Very nice ...
  • Taste The Flame
    General: Okay, please don't freak out.   I really like this one, but it needs ...
  • In-Sky
    General: Try to break this up into smaller paragraphs, particularly in the secti ...
  • Chapter One of End of All Hope
    General: This is very gripping in general, however, it deserves a thorough editi ...