General: You have a gift for painting with words and world-building (or destruct ...
Crying over Crimson.
General: In general, the rhymes are stilted and the lines are too brief. Brief c ...
Maud And The Captain
Wow. Excellent writing. Have you considered entering this in the 2012 Amazon Bre ...
The End of the Beginning or However That Goes
General: Amazing. you really know how to make a girl fall off the edge of her se ...
Your talent is amazing. How is it that I am the only who has read this and left ...
Victory is Not for the Weak
The language and imagery was beautiful. Well done, though I didn't like the outc ...
I'll add more later, but I find it hard to believe this passage was written by t ...
infidelity is spelled wrong Question: are you talking about bsex or anarchy? ...
Probably my favorite so far, and all the while sticking to the rules. Kudos to y ...
The Tenth Legion
General: Lots of typos, little dude. Might want to run a grammar/spell check one ...
A Day in the life of the Repo Man (in real time)
Wow, congratulations. Now we're both exhausted.