OpheliaWrites's Compliments

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Last Compliment: 9/30/2016

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Project Reviews

  • Iron Shoes
    Just FYI, there are two novels by this same title already by Mollie Giles and Ma ...
  • Kindar's Cure
    FYI, I just rated this on Page-to-Fame! What a coincidence. :-)

Submission Reviews

  • Medieval (revised)
    General: I'm returning the critique. Thank you for reading my submission. At thi ...
  • Necronomicon
    Clearly, you know what you're doing. I'm impressed. This is easily the best entr ...
  • Chapter 1:
    I can see the movie now... Jurassic Henhouse or Night of the Living Chickens or ...
  • Prologue
    This is absolutely hilarious. I'm laughing at my desk and people are looking at ...
  • On the trail
    This is absolutely hilarious and I'm giving it 5 stars despite the atrocious gra ...
  • Shelter Us
    Excellent!  Couple of nitpicky things to make it beyond criticism:  In the o ...
  • We Will Remember
    Beautifully written. Perhaps make the number of years greater than two.
  • Chapter 1.1 - The Dream
    I keep feeling like I'm reading a journal entry instead of a carefully crafted n ...
  • Prologue
    Please run a grammar/spelling check then read it aloud to a friend. I think you' ...
  • Screaming Swans
    General: Excellent work! I've always been too chatty for poetry but you certainl ...
  • 'Til Death Do Us Part
    I think it's 'Til death do us part.
  • Cocoon
    This has potential but I think you need to step back and re-evaluate. First, ple ...
  • A World Without Harmony
    General: LOVED IT!!  Structure: I found some of your punctuation marks distracti ...
  • The 531st Annual SquiggleSmudge Turnip Festival
    Superb! I can't believe I missed this entry. Is it an excerpt from a larger work ...
  • Teardrop of Fire
    Three major suggestions:  First, read this out loud to yourself or a friend an ...
  • Chapter 1
    Structure: "She lowered her hand and made her way up the street towards a bus pi ...
  • Chapter 1
    Plot: Your story is very engaging, but I'm afraid I have to set aside for now. I ...
  • At Last
    This is a great take on the challenge, but I'm not sure it was executed. There a ...
  • Myrna of the Extinction Committee.
    General: By far my favorite!!!  Plot: LOVE the ending, however I did want a bit ...
  • Guardians of the Soul Chapter One
    General: I agree with Slyphy about your opening sentence. Don't give your reader ...
  • 01.  Beginnings
    General: In general try to cut out the word "that" except where absolutely neces ...
  • Darkness hides the Truth
    This was really difficult to read in one huge paragraph. Don't give your reader ...
  • Chapter Three (Revised)
    Plot: Great plot movement in this chapter. I hate dull parties, but this one was ...
  • Dragomir
    General: I'm so tired of vampires, BUT you have an interesting voice. This piece ...
  • Heavenly Pillar
    Couple of words spelled incorrectly.  Also, I'm prejudiced against the word "v ...
  • Chapter Three (Revised)
    General: Got half-way through. Gotta go, but promise to read more later.  BTW, ...
  • Chapter Two
    General: Be patient with me. As I said before, this isn't my favorite genre. ...
  • Chapter Two
    General: Can't finish now. Will read later. here are some thoughts in the meanti ...
  • The Fallen Rose, Chapter One: The Dreaming
    General: I say this to virtually everyone because it is the best piece of advice ...
  • Chapter One:
    General: I should start off by saying I do not normally read this type of sci-fi ...
  • Chapter 3- Cornered (5th Edit)
    General: Big POV shift with the shadow. You might want to consider making this a ...
  • Chapter 2 Rebels Part 1 (6th Edit)
    He fingered his <rich> sword. seems like an awkward adjective for a sword. Maybe ...
  • 2. One
    General: It may just be my connection, but chunks of your text keep disappearing ...
  • Chapter One
    General: One of the best pieces of advice I ever received was to cut out all unn ...
  • Agappe Liberation
    General: agape spelled wrong  Imagery: a sliver of truth impales the cold desola ...
  • Crimson and Ice
    around, more, shredded, bruised, gently......but who cares, the imagery is gorge ...
  • Sky Dance
    I struggled with this challenge, too, and my fingers are flying as I give feedba ...
  • Chapter One
    "...but hum a remembered bit of music she had heard there before.  She shivere ...
  • Chapter One
    General: "It was cool enough and the dew still hung heavy enough in the air to.. ...
  • Chapter 1
    General: Alenson's---- the first time you spelled it Alensen. Which is it?  so ...
  • Chapter One of End of All Hope
    General: This is very gripping in general, however, it deserves a thorough editi ...
  • Delinquent (First Chapter)
    General: parent/principal  is too casual for a book though it's a great shortcut ...
  • Abby
    General: The title got my attention, but your summary paragraph revealed several ...
  • Delinquent (First Chapter)
    General: parent/principal  is too casual for a book though it's a great shortcut ...
  • Preface
    General: Wow. This is amazing. I encourage you to continue, perhaps post more ch ...
  • Prologue
    This has potential, but I think you'll find that most readers are so put off by ...