P_Dwarf's Compliments

Compliments:  10

Last Compliment: 8/30/2017

Brilliant (10)

Submission Reviews

  • Posh Nosh
    That was funny. Very clever and unexpected ending.  Dialogue throughout was grea ...
  • Time's Justice
    I found this really annoying - I read and re-read multiple times, each time more ...
  • The Invite
    Hi Ellie.  I don't have anything to say really that hasn't already been said.  B ...
  • A Hot Time in The Ole Town, Tonight
    Great story. Well written, extremely atmospheric and interesting. Lots of nice p ...
  • Time to Shine
    I liked this a lot.  And, going against the flow, I liked Janette, she was a go- ...
  • Beyond the Clouds
    Very moving. You have caught so well the regrets, 'what ifs', and curtailed hope ...
  • Where is HaShem?
    This was well written and emotive; I think you have done a good job of capturing ...
  • Prescience
    Not sure how many time's I have read this now. First time didn't like or get it ...
  • Tentacles
    Like this! And you may not be demanding it but I have sympathy for the mother. N ...
  • Not all There
    I like the fact the situation is obvious early - an attempt to surprise would al ...