PennyPritchard's Compliments

Compliments:  54

Last Compliment: 7/27/2016

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  • 10.  Judges and Princes 1
    Reading this again after the failure yesterday for the feedback to take and I ha ...
  •    F**K‘em Pills 3K
    Well, the typos have been pointed out, and I am all for the comments by Rstringe ...
  • Woman song & Booze
    Another good honest lyric.   Wouldn't know the genre.  Some kind of 'western'  - ...
  • Chap 2
    Ophelia gives excellent critique; wish I could do as well.  The last great wisdo ...
  • That don't make me bad
    I believe this is true.   Delightful poem.   You've definitely got a talent.   S ...
  • Impossibilities
    The title of the poem is of course, the answer.   When you beg for love it is di ...
  • Monster's Lament
    Thanks for the clarification.   I get your point now that I have read your reply ...
  • Does this follow the rules?
    I too have made playing by the rules on this challenge into something to take se ...
  • My Friend and I
    Hey!  I'll go out on a limb on this one.  ink- adjective; uncomfortable-adjectiv ...
  • The Pitch
    I'm going to have to get back to you on this.   I have to do some study on what ...
  • Alone In The Night
    Yes, the rhythm and rhyme do give this a better sense of structure.    The readi ...
  • Fallen Angel
    Nice poem about forsaken love.   A few confusions between past and present tense ...
  • Revenge of the Nerd
    An interesting portrrayal of the revenge instinct.   Did not know whether the bu ...
  • the better part of me
    A good expression of a powerlessness, and not being able to discern the control ...
  • My schedule: The Thief.
    If the need for death is the thief, I'm wondering what is going on here;  some k ...
  • How Do You Love Me? Let Me count The Ways ...
    I think it works well as a parody, which I think you intend by the use of the ti ...
  • Light in Dark
    I think this poem is saying that there is dark within the light.   I am well awa ...
  • There will not be.
    Alienwolf.  This is a remarkable poem.  In fact, it would take me several more r ...
  • puff, the magic car
    Can there be the bright angels without the dark one?   Thanks for letting me kno ...
  • The monster under my bed
    Very good.    Is the all needed in the second last line - for the rhythm.   Also ...
  • Capsule Life
    Nice top hear about the life of a 'Friend'.   All the best and continued  succes ...
  • Things said, things done
    We live on three plane, so to speak,  thought, word and deed.   I also ran acros ...
  • Past, Present, Future
    This is the myth of the age.   The philosophy was dominant for awhile also in th ...
  • Quote for quotes.
    I read somewhere else that the wisdom consisted in putting those quotes into pra ...
  • Tragedy, love, and science
    Oh dear!   You've hit upon a quagmire within the working of science today.   Sci ...
  • I Go Not Far
    Thanks for all of your comments.   Reading them is helping me in my grounding. ...
  • Your own path
    I wish to embark finally, at my late stage in life, in making my own path.   It ...
  • Howard’s Last Wynter
    General: Thank you so much for dealing with the 'heart' of a 'criminal mind', wh ...
  • 7. Chapter 7:
    Just a couple of typos... 1. would be fun yet, and signed (sighed) 2.  answer it ...
  • Except the past
    I guess you know, when the past is lost, that it is really over.   I wonder some ...
  • brother & sister
    This is good, humorous.    Like the play that would be taking place in the on-lo ...
  • Villanelle for a Brother
    I understand the brilliance in this poem, even though I don't understand your co ...
  • 6. Chapter 6:
    This little 'vignette' could, can stand all by itself.   It's got the unity, and ...
  • By any other name an angel (Angela)
    All in white, the pale tenderness of your shoulders part shrouded in the falling ...
  • The Villain Villanelle
    I did read up on villanelle so I know you have done the three verse stanza more ...
  • 'Cast Out' , Chapter 1
    Just beginning to realize that I understand next to nothing about writing, despi ...
  • Commedia Aesira
    Looked up and found the Norse gods.   Thanks. Yet even the old one eyed man has ...
  • L.A. Bus Stop
    I especially agree with Duddy Fudd's comments.  I am beginning to find the patte ...
  • Slipping Ellipsis
    ellipsis Are ellipsis ever used in the break between dialogue, interrupted by Jo ...
  • Rhyme's Reason
    Actually, I'm the one with the problem.   My apologies.   You have the disciplin ...
  • What Would Superman Do?
    I like the comment below that one never know if one will act outside the 'paradi ...
  • Omelette
    OK.  I followed word for word.   Clever, clever, clever.   How you go in and out ...
  • Dark Instant
    Sometimes I have had the thought ' What if time stops '   ' What if I run out of ...
  • The Train
    Have read the posts below.   The sympathetic concern for your health,  the imagi ...
  • Wonder
    Wonder!    The mystery of who we are,  yes I like the you, and you, and you, and ...
  • Unspelled
    OK Rik.   I'm fascinated, thinking there's a deeper meaning that I'm not getting ...
  • Rats
    First off get it while I see it - by day and by -night? Came here cause I wanted ...
  • Fiction: Literary vs. Genre
    What an interesting distinction!   It's like separating the high brow from the l ...
  • What The Hell?
    That's the way it is with life generally possibly:   whenever we believe (had fa ...
  • Chapter 7
    I don't know where to begin.  This is the best written chapter so far I feel, an ...
  • Chapter 6
    This chapter had a different tone from the others.   Again you were into the typ ...
  • Chapter 5
    This is getting awfully interesting.   The drama is building.  First I would lik ...
  • Progress (Stage)
    General: Imaginative to picture the wagon deserted for so many years.  It made m ...
  • How to Protect Your Writing on WEbook
    You asked for feedback on the copyrite issue.  It's true what you say about the ...