PennyPritchard's Compliments

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Last Compliment: 3/22/2017

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Submission Reviews

  • Inside Outside - Part 2
    Just a question from part l.  If there was a car, were there no tracks to follow ...
  • Inside Outside - Part 1
    there had been no sig(h) of him. (but) on that first day, but she’d dealt brave ...
  • 11. Judges and Princes 2
    revenant  will have to check Webster, or covenant? Yes you certainly do fill in ...
  • Day Seven
    Hi Rik:  I found it difficult to 'believe'.   Particularly the change in the man ...
  • Black Diamond's last chapter
    You've got a Portal too, but I['m not sure I would want to go through it.  Glad ...
  • Cassia
    Excellent description and a real talent for narration  The opening seems familia ...
  • Net - Didn't Work
    Oh, this was fun.   I actually broke out in laughter at the end.
  • LieMaker 3000
    You're putting me on!   But I believe you.   Hope the judges do too!   This gadg ...
  • Perspective Travel
    Reality vacation is really a good idea.  Great message here.
  • "Oh I do like to be beside the seaside"
    Gee, for the money, I'll just make do with the kitty litter and a bit of imagina ...
  • Double foot Super Cleaner.
    Uh! Uh!  "I used' use it?   Not part of the guarantee, I guess.  I'm happy with ...
  • ⚡Bar Flys⚡
    Loved this.   Real wit.   Don't think I'd risk the 'swatters' to actually do it ...
  • Refinance/Reconcile Your Soul at Record Low Rates
    Great Idea.   Leo.   I notice that you include the free will as part of the barg ...
  • Within : Prose
    This is very well written, although it is not my genre I appreciate your gift. ...
  • April is the Cruelest Month
    The passing of the seasons, (as in Ecclesiastics?)This is the second poem I'm re ...
  • MLAAD (MY Life as a Dog.) Prologue
    you' d got a winner!   Love your writing style.   And the concept is just terrif ...
  • Chap 1
    where found out  were found out!  We also feed it our bodies, may they stay dead ...
  • Protest
    Congratulations.  I'm so happy.  Enjoy your coffee and a special treat.   Lookin ...
  • All Day All Night
    I think you will fit these words, to the melody.   I have confidence in the rhyt ...
  • First time in forever
    Well, I'm delighted that I picked this verse.   Nice sentiments about being welc ...
  • The Dig
    Yeah!   You did a good job.   It was an interesting and a/a free story.   Very u ...
  • Desparate For (Plan-B)
    Oh this was beautiful.   Hope you get credit for it.   A stroke of genius to mak ...
  • Poor Abigail
    P.S.  secretly and silent were your modifiers, if I read right?   Good job.
  • For F's Sake!
    You missed:  Filadelphia Filharmonic! in the spelling.   Clever One.      Good h ...
  • My Way or the Hi-way
    Well this poem/lyric is just professional all the way.   What sentiment.   This ...
  • Tie
    I broke into laughter at the beginning of the second paragraph.   Gee!   Have I ...
  • Reductio ad absurdem
    Well the last line is certainly appropriate for this challenge.   We certainly h ...
  • The adversary
    Now I am stumped.   I could find no adjectives or adverbs.   Help me out you guy ...
  • Chains
    Ah the innocence of the little 'boy or girl?'.    The return of a good deed.   I ...
  • Slotz
    First of all, I need to express my incompetence to give you a feedback on the hi ...
  • Slotz
    P.S.   I think you must have a humorous kind of irony about you, to base the phy ...
  • Taking A Bath
    Good job.   The memory of cleaning between the toes, and everything.   Good poem ...
  • Launcelot's Last Day
    Thanks for an insight in the history.  It was interesting to read the olde Engli ...
  • Jump Jump
    Thanks for giving the background of the poem.   Reduces the though to a childlik ...
  • Denial Ain't Just a River
    I'm surprised that he was able to jot down the times.  Especially when he can't ...
  • The Nihilist's List of Things To Do.
    Wish it had more about 'values', because it is my understanding that confusion o ...
  • Until You Come Back Home
    Oh!   I was going to complain about child abuse until I learned it was a puppy. ...
  • Working From Home
    Thought from the title and your remarks that it would be about a 'brothel'.   Am ...
  • The Daily Grind
    The reciprocity is very 'engaging'.   Love the implications of the toiletry.   W ...
  • Schizo Sex Fiend
    Interesting to treat the female dichotomy: good girl - bad girl - as an oppressi ...
  • Old Mrs. Hubbard
    He jumped  on top that rat, and.....perhaps needs an 'of'.  Apart from that coul ...
  • seven years old
    Yes, you can.
  • One Defining Moment
    Ah!  Lovely.   You worked the body language to a purpose.   This I believe is it ...
  • It's Only A Game
    I am so amazed when I find authors who are able to put a whole story into so few ...
  • The Girl in the Library
    Body language needs to communicate some meaning.  Perhaps you could include  a d ...
  • I Wanted It All
    Good life.   Good bio.   All the best.
  • The Nonconformist
    Glad you live in your own shoes still, and not not following the pack.   Good go ...
  • Destiny
    Yes.   We choose our own destiny.   Thus we must continue always to develop grea ...
  • Membership
    Oh!   This is a good one.   I wouldn't be able to pay the member fees in any cas ...
  • An immoral book or a bad book?
    Bravo Wilde.   Just like life, it is 'we' who read the morality into it!
  • Tides and currents.
    Yeah!   I'd rather swim in a river than in an ocean.   grin grin.
  • Blurring Lines
    It was helpful again to read the comments below.   Especially that of Croft_Misf ...
  • Teens
    Thanks S.   Edentatus.   I am realizing that you are indeed a very good writer. ...
  • Should
    Oh!   I see, I didn't 'get this' until I read one of the comments below.   Let's ...
  • You Call Me Wicked
    Oh - there's so much pain in this.   Would you kindly BeFriend me again.   I rea ...
  • 1 part 1
    Well, I thoroughly enjoyed this; found it flowed well, and had a lot of detail. ...
  • Chapter 13
    This is an amazing piece of writing, Evi7.   The memory does work for him when h ...
  • Chapter 11
    Well, I'm going to hit you with the bad new first.   I found a mistake.   And in ...
  • 10. Chapter 10:
    Dear Rik,  won't swear!!!!   He did run into Ryder.   How does he make cars expl ...
  • 9. Chapter 9:
    Wow.   I did have a panic attack myself however, when he first got into the car ...
  • 8. Chapter 8:
    This, as usual, was exquisitely well written.   Another interesting character 'l ...
  • Wicker Song
    Well perhaps you do use the phoenix image!  Nietzsche (a man thoroughly misunder ...
  • SÉAMUS IN WICKER
    Just posting in to confirm my enjoyment of your work.  He is 'on the prowl thoug ...
  • Dressed In Mourning
    The love expressed in this poem brought tears to my eyes.  I am truly grateful t ...
  • Couplet
    A feeling beyond expression even through metaphor.   The language is not 'large' ...
  • Catch Sunlight
    Thank you for prodding me onto a familiarity with this form.   But have you not ...
  • By any other name an angel (Angela)
    Thanks for all your summaries and explanations, Gereg.  I am a little fatigued n ...
  • Villanelle for a Brother
    Sorry, just understood the title, and the real physical reality behind the poem, ...
  • 5. Chapter 5:
    Excellent.    The set up is there and everything.   Just surprised that it wasn' ...
  • 4. Chapter 4:
    Too Much, Rik!!!!     Unbelievable!   just one error.   no final move........ Ha ...
  • 3. Chapter 3:
    Why then was his once adoring wife going out of her way to make the separation ...
  • Flies
    Distraction more potently than malice bars the action of higher moral purpose. ...
  • 2. Chapter 2:
    I like the order of chapter as they are Rik.    There is quite a different tone/ ...
  • Ranks of Gettysburg
    Yes - I visited the town, and walked the fields back in the 60's.  So, I have ha ...
  • 1. Chapter 1:  (Rev 2)
    Well, Rik.   Got so into the action that I didn't even notice the grammatical 'e ...
  • Omelette
    The play's the thing by which I'll catch the conscience of the king.   I use thi ...
  • The Game
    Yup>   It's all about knowledge (philosophy) vs. life. The Tree of Knowledge vs. ...
  • Modern Daze
    'Scrolling' down the internet river? Yeah!   D'it  -  We have everything but the ...
  • The Entirety of the Sky
    You see I have read this before; don't know where.....I wonder about one thing I ...
  • Daymare
    OK>   I don't quite know what is happening here.   Who is the interviewer and wh ...
  • Sea Gift
    Now I am touched.  Now I can only say that I wish I had written a poem as great ...
  • Luna See
    The dust on the planet earth once too came alive.   But even with the radiation ...
  • The Cola Rose
    Well I'm with satyr on a possible deeper meaning.   Like the rose contrasted wit ...
  • Ode to a Pornographic Poet
    This is the most brilliant word play I have heard from you.   Thanks for the lau ...
  • The "IZE Have It
    I'm guilty on all counts!
  • The Adventures of Professor Shortsight: Part 1
    Short sight with amazing vision;  Carnivores chasing people up and down;    who ...
  • Sunspots
    Hey!   This is the meter and rhyme scheme of all my 'offhand humor' poetry.    I ...
  • On the Release of the Lockerbie Bomber
    Don't know the incident, I'm afraid.   You must have been terrified.   You have ...
  • Wonder
    I liked the you, and you and you and you.....each one of us a member of the huma ...
  • Twist
    Well I think this is congruent with the philosophy I have been preaching lately, ...
  • Tut's Uncommon
    I agree with all your comments below.   I think the rhythm comes naturally to yo ...
  • Montana Sky
    Ah!   This was a beautiful poem.   It was like a quiet night,  a presence, and s ...
  • Bird Watcher
    Well for Noetry, this certainly has the elements of poetry: the leap to the univ ...
  • "Puke Vomit Rockets"
    It is interesting how this poem moved from the rhythmic, rhyming scheme to a mor ...
  • "Cheap Dream Pimp Whore"
    There is one major difference between us.   You write from feeling whereas I wri ...
  • "Ugly Ways"
    There are possibly similarities in our lives that we could communicate with one ...
  • A New Gal in Town
    It's nice to have the idea of a 'down to earth' vampire story.   You've got it t ...
  • Prologue Poem: Moving Swiftly Into a Colossal Ocean
    I think there is real talent here.   I didn't read until this post,  the last ve ...
  • 9 The Eye of a Storm
    This is tantalizing.   I want to know whose presence and the circumstances.    I ...