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Last Compliment: 11/8/2016

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  • Black and white
    Yes.   You certainly made your point here.  The black and white I associate with ...
  • Epilogue2, Reflection of Time 2
       "Their good,  They're good.  And of course if he tells them the truth they wi ...
  • 16.  Forest of Darkness 2
    cursed loudly with a half scowl it's on the saddle they're bigger than others ye ...
  • 15.  The Forest of Darkness
    help - to help with the chores. if he could  - that if he could.   (This might b ...
  • 14.  A knight and a Hostel
    monetary.  monestary, unless they are taking in indulgences! sat the horse  sat ...
  • 7,  Lawyers make bad monks 1
    Well, I hope my pickup on the typos is of some help to you.  I know they are sma ...
  • 7,  Lawyers make bad monks 1
    Pardon.   Reread.   The transition from Martin to Conrad was good.  Thanks for t ...
  • 6. Wennal the Judge 3
    but still to see as   (could not 'see' the sense of this) morning that I could n ...
  • 5.  Wennal the Judge 2
    were there had once been water. -where there had once been Also looked on onager ...
  • 4. Wennal the Judge 1
    Wennal has adopted the name Lyle I presume since his meeting with the specter. ...
  • 3. The Chapel 3
    comma after   - like my life.   Important. OK.  The monk is Martin Luther, and i ...
  • 2. The Chapel 2
    when he a and a select Again, I'm still not sure who is speaking to who.  The mo ...
  • 1. The Chapel
    "Tell me monk, do you think the Devil confess'?"  would confess? "Do not answer ...
  • Get Out of Jail Free
    Loved that you put it in a story contedxt.   This really worked.   It could appe ...
  • The Wishing Pig!
    Why a pig?
  • Life-Changing Fish Mate
    Had to go off to google this one.   Yes, there were mermen.  And Sirens, etc. ...
  • No.2
    You are writing well.    Technically there are a few typos, etc. so it might be ...
  • No. 1
    General: Most of the possibilities for technical improvement have already been t ...
  • Grown Ups
    Unfortunately, many parents don't see the opportunities in life to 'educate' the ...
  • I'm Sorry Daddy
    The repetition works so well, because it is such a vital thought within the youn ...
  • Life
    Loved the movie!
  • The forging,
    There are just some enemies that you do not fight.   You have capitalized BETRAY ...
  • Unbreakable
    The broken cannot be broken.    The pieces get so small that when they are flung ...
  • Fate 2
    aromour   armor?  I think I often do what you do.   I was interpreted recently o ...
  • My place
    What a wonderful gift of expression you have.   This was beautiful: the craftsma ...
  • Winter
    icy silence. There is a metaphor in this poem, and the concept of winter. But th ...
  • Totem
    Maybe they are all black birds.   You do say they are 'totems'.   while the Frie ...
  • Fate
    lets instead of less you bend feel it needs a verb after body -piled on the pyre ...
  • Ripped into Darkness (For C)
    man's eternal strife?  Brilliant ending!   I didn't know for sure whether there ...
  • Insomniac
    I took up Buddhist meditation to learn to still that restless mind of mine.   I ...
  • What's it like to be me?
    As usual, with the protagonist of your poetry, for someone who always feels they ...
  • Seek me out,
    Most wolves that I meet daily in the neighborhood where I live are not so consci ...
  • Brothers
    I feel it needs another line, or something.   It doesn't quite feel finished - t ...
  • The Bogey Man
    So much fear of taking another into one's own depths of darkness.    Such respon ...
  • The Bogey Man
    Ditto for this one.   Did you know it's a duplicate?
  • Dad
    Oh!   I know some pain from childhood too.   My father was diagnosed as bi-polar ...
  • Devils Solace
    I read your words, and hope to leave you with thoughts that return to you an app ...
  • Rehearsal
    Glad you enjoy!   And I think you should   It's not many who can recognize the d ...
  • What's for dinner
    Oh!   Loved the humor.   That will teach those vamps!
  • The Fairy and the Thing
    Ah!   I can listen to your songs with a clear conscience.   Loved the epic story ...
  • Spirits on the wire
    What a good description.    I do know what you're talking about you know!    I t ...
  • Dark Angel
    Actually  your poetry would do that to anyone!!!!    I think it's breath upon yo ...
  • Oleander
    This reminds me of a few lines in another poem.   Don't believe a word of it.
  • Dead Heart
    I remember that character in the Luther story, who lived on and on and on.    I ...
  • untitled
    Thank you for the biography.    One thing that you are not and that is a victim. ...
  • Heros
    Good that you see her as the hero.   There's mention of regrets in this poem, bu ...
  • Dance
    Yes.   That's conquering.    Accepting.   As Nietzsche says, regretting nothing ...
  • The cold is coming
    This is an excellent poem.   Personal, and yet not 'too' personal.   Excellent i ...
  • The interrogators dance
    OK.   I think I would understand better if I knew the specifics.   But I'm not a ...
  • My Hands
    I'm so glad you expressed the thoughts in the last verse.   You have hinted at y ...
  • Senseless prose 1
    Well, this is heartfelt.   I especially liked "I can't hate myself I'm my own be ...
  • For Carla
    Ah!   I felt that way for awhile in my life, until I learned to leave well enoug ...
  • How easy it would be
    Ah!   I remind myself that it is the 'wolf' who is talking.   I especially liked ...
  • Yellow Monologue
    Actually I'm not sure if this is statistically true, apparently there are more p ...
  • A kenning
    Don't understand what proof you are talking about that 'we live'.   Are you sayi ...
  • Heroism tempered with mortal sin
    Who didn't then understand..... Certainly pride is not one of the mortal sins. ...
  • Shadows and Shades
    I guess the poem is all about feeling the need to face one fears, to look in tha ...
  • Cut out my icy heart
    My interpretation is that we know others pain through our own.   This is a good ...
  • Today
    I laughed, at Not even hate to keep me warm. Don't know reference to 'helm cleft ...
  • The Desert Stare
    Ah!   Don't believe it, a 'happy poem', of sorts.   But I read into it a metapho ...
  • Memories of Pain
    This is certainly an honorable 'memory'.    Yes, I too, despite those who would ...
  • Agent of Fate
    How long have 'I' been the agent of fate? This poem takes a different perspectiv ...
  • Posers
    I identify with the sentiment, although I'm not known to be the wolf.
  • Predators Dance
    Don't believe a word of it, but yes, it is straight from the heart.   If this fo ...
  • Wolf in a Cage
    Victim of the victim.  Good going, Wolf.   I especially like the like - the idea ...
  • Shadows of the King
    Well, this brings out your dark side, and help me to understand what is at the ' ...
  • Chapter 1
    I feel more familiar with your writing style now, and had no difficulty reading ...
  • Chap 3
    hear in this wonderful place. here in this ;- also dogs(') apostrophe kennel -fi ...
  • Chap 5
      The door was closed in my face and once again I was left to my own thoughts. ...
  • Ode to My Black Thumb
    Like adding water and pulling weeds. or Like tending to the weeds,  sounds like ...
  • 1. Assassination
    Interesting plot.  If you have the chance will you check out my work at.....etc. ...
  • Dawn Rising (excerpt)
    Too bad you didn't add a pumpkin and had entered it in that challenge.   There's ...
  • Ninjistuists.
    I thought the final two paragraph were excellent.   I'm not sure about some of t ...
  • The monster under my bed
    Very good.    Is the all needed in the second last line - for the rhythm.   Also ...
  • Poor Abigail
    Leaves me wondering what just happened.  First the talk about the blade to his n ...
  • Got no heat at home
    So cold my body aches and moan  Maybe My cold body aches and I moan?    Just a s ...
  • I ask questions
    I believe this is an excellent entry, but not sure there is a 'real' adjective o ...
  • That Nurse is Smoking!
    I'm not intelligent enough to sort out the gymnastics of what words would be leg ...
  • ON THE WALL
    Also, could we call this a digital poem with the message that I (1) is reduced t ...
  • How about some bloody parameters?
    Thank you again, sir, for your recent input here.   I'll be back to study it bef ...
  • Sky Dance
    Gee!  Before getting into the technicalities of this challenge, and it is making ...
  • Eyes Red Red Red
    It was hard for me to trace the 'interaction' between the child and the doll.  A ...
  • The Skeleton Man
    The use of a narrator is a departure from your usual style.  I'm just not sure t ...
  • I Have Hazel Eyes
    I'm scared and for my life now   (Did you want the 'and' in this line.    This i ...
  • Working From Home
    Yes, Stuart.   This works  brilliantly.   I just realized another meaning when I ...
  • We cry
    Think this would be called a litany, which is usually a form of prayer.   So you ...
  • That Girl In Black
    This is your best poem.   Keep at it.   You have much to say.
  • There is no calm
    shaving a few words here and there, (I've test it, it can be done) would easily ...
  • Working From Home
    I'd leave the baby's education fund out of the mix.  Her day has  been pretty bu ...
  • A Person Forgotten
    Interesting that it is written in the negative.   I wonder what would happen if ...
  • An empty heart x
    Very expressive.   Please go over the technical details, especially the spelling ...
  • Texan River Dance
    Well, thanks for the summary below.   I needed the clarification, although I did ...
  • Daddy Isn't Mine
    Very good balancing between the 'mother' and the 'father', and the child's persp ...
  • Now She Lays Them Down to Sleep
    I don't understand the significance of the "Feet of smushed green".   And theref ...
  • A Spiders' Life
    Like the point of view of the eight-footed creature.   Do I understand that they ...
  • Grandpa's adventure
    I agree with Evi7.  We don't know the circumstances or the intention of the gran ...
  • A day in the life of Junifer Lee
    For granite or for granted...? This was a reality for so many of the poor in the ...
  • Light in Dark
    I think this poem is saying that there is dark within the light.   I am well awa ...
  • My Dear Diary
    All lined with words, they go uphill, sometimes they slide down or maybe like a ...
  • Now She Lays Them Down to Sleep
    I don't understand the significance of the "Feet of smushed green".   And theref ...
  • My Dear Diary
    All lined with words, they go uphill, sometimes they slide down or maybe like a ...
  • Texan River Dance
    Oh I get it - if I am right. -  It's a betting game, and they are trying to read ...
  • Texan River Dance
    Like the comment below I too would have liked to have seen more 'spontaneous' bo ...
  • My Life, In Seventy-Four Words
    You put into words the old adage.   Yeah!   Life's like that.  You hit the essen ...
  • On teaching
    Don't we all value our independence, and our ability to look after ourselves?  ( ...
  • The pen and the sword
    Oh!   this is ancient.   It may even be biblical.   Good metaphor, I think, don' ...
  • Liberty
    I take this to me - don't compromise your freedom!
  • On Hypocrisy.
    Don't think the two quotes are necessarily congruent.   They could be speaking t ...
  • Sound advice.
    Don't know where I heard this either;  sounds very 'Aristotelian',  of the mean ...

  • Am accepting your invite to be a Friend.    I am most happy to find that you are ...
  • Something every comedian should know
    Very intelligent Mistical Nia.   Minniefloozle also has a point.
  • Chapter 9
    Thanks for the call, Evi7Penguin.   What a good promotion!   Love it. Really enj ...
  • Chapter 12
    Hope you don't feel that way.   Good beginning.  Get in touch when you have more ...
  • "Pushkin Flunky"
    Haven't read all the feedback below but I would comment on one; that is the cont ...
  • Ending of "Lycanthropy"
    Thank you for an ending that is an ending and a resolution; without the need for ...
  • Chapter 4
    "I'm wondering if it will strike a good emotion." To answer your quote, Justin's ...
  • Chapter 3
    Another good write here, evi7.  I definitely feel that the speech patterns of bo ...
  • 4 - Ten Seconds
    Character Development: I need to know more about who is speaking.   I have never ...