R_D_Allen's Compliments

Compliments:  21

Last Compliment: 7/28/2010

In-depth (5)

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  • 1. Chapter 1
    "As she approached the neighborhood gathering, she searched the cotton-candied f ...
  • Chapter 2
    General: This chapter is definitely not as good as the other two. I don't know w ...
  • chapter one [edited]
    General: AMAZING. I don't mean to sound like one of those people who just fangir ...
Brilliant (5)

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  • Chapter 4
    Good. Still love your voice. It's awesome. And the plot is very good; you're sti ...
  • Chapter 1
    With the feel you're giving this story, you could do much better than this. I sa ...
  • 1:Nikhil
    The story seems good but I find it very hard to read because the wording is chop ...
Enlightening (5)

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  • Chapter 3
    Very good! This one flows much easier than your other chapters, and I can feel t ...
  • Chapter 2
    Good, very good chapter. I like how you ended it, but it feels a little unfinish ...
  • Chapter 1
    Much better! It's more of a 4.6 at this point, but 4 just isn't enough, so I rou ...
Helpful (4)

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Motivating (2)

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  • LOL
    I found this on PageToFame and I gave it a 5! It was incredible to read! I haven ...

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