R_D_Allen's Compliments

Compliments:  5

Last Compliment: 5/30/2010

Brilliant (5)

Submission Reviews

  • Chapter 4
    Good. Still love your voice. It's awesome. And the plot is very good; you're sti ...
  • Chapter 1
    With the feel you're giving this story, you could do much better than this. I sa ...
  • 1:Nikhil
    The story seems good but I find it very hard to read because the wording is chop ...
  • Prologue
    Much much much better! I love the new ending, it's brilliant. I can see you tryi ...
  • The Loss
    General: The only thing that keeps this story from being five stars would be two ...