R_D_Allen's Compliments

Compliments:  5

Last Compliment: 7/28/2010

In-depth (5)

Submission Reviews

  • 1. Chapter 1
    "As she approached the neighborhood gathering, she searched the cotton-candied f ...
  • Chapter 2
    General: This chapter is definitely not as good as the other two. I don't know w ...
  • chapter one [edited]
    General: AMAZING. I don't mean to sound like one of those people who just fangir ...
  • One
    General: This story has an AWESOME idea behind it. That much is definitely obvio ...
  • Prologue
    General: The story is very gripping. I felt my stomach churn when he slit her th ...