1. Chapter 1
"As she approached the neighborhood gathering, she searched the cotton-candied f ...
General: This chapter is definitely not as good as the other two. I don't know w ...
chapter one [edited]
General: AMAZING. I don't mean to sound like one of those people who just fangir ...
General: This story has an AWESOME idea behind it. That much is definitely obvio ...
General: The story is very gripping. I felt my stomach churn when he slit her th ...