RobJFalcon's Compliments

Compliments:  19

Last Compliment: 11/15/2017

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Submission Reviews

  • Royally F— (2)
    Well done. I like the idea of physically removing something non-physical. Blurri ...
  • Good Evening
    Hey Ben,  I read this and sat on it for a while because I was confused, but read ...
  • The Parore
    Good story, a perfect match for the challenge. An unfortunate circumstance, but ...
  • Until the Darkness is Gone
    Good fun. I'll have a listen at your song too.  My advice for typos is to read i ...
  • Playing House
    Hey Chris,  I liked the style of this one, it's different. It's interesting to f ...
  • The Taste of Grapes
    I agree with Chris that my story is an info dump... wait, I mean...  I feel less ...
  • Things Remembered
    It's drunk for OMG and ... I don't know
  • Things Remembered
    Wow. I've never seen a bad story from you, Ken. Some different (like your other ...
  • Hope
    Well, the names are good, at least!
  • Poison Creek
    Hey Ken,  This is a very interesting, well written story, and I cannot compete o ...
  • Of Monsters and Men
    Hey Kristy,  This has a scary truth to it. I, like Lily, hope that this is not f ...
  • Praying hands
    Oh yeah, I think this line is missing something: When Marie strolling into my cl ...
  • Marauding Gangs of Children Doing Bad
    Ha ha, should of been more specific. Get it? should of? Man, I'm on a roll today ...
  • Marauding Gangs of Children Doing Bad
    Na na na na na na I'll never tell!  Chris, the way Tarantino writes it could be ...
  • The Piper
    Actually I thought the shadow puppets were a good way to show a patient who has ...
  • The Piper
    Well done Ken, as usual  I'm not the best at getting rid of extra bits, but mayb ...
  • Decay
    Hey Duncan,  This is actually my biggest fear as well, although through experien ...
  • Trojan Horse
    Hey Ken, I understand your frustration. Let me start by saying that I don't ofte ...
  • Count to Five
    I really like how the counting all ties together, and I like how in the end you ...