Stuck Within The Den Of Shadows: A Realm Of The Spiritus Raptor Series
OK Well you have a good work going here. Somethings you could be a bit lax on ...
Hey Stuart, You corrected the errors yourself. And apparently you are right, t ...
Very good, some errors but you have time to revise. I really liked it though an ...
Still very broad, and unfortunately it could be used because of its broadness, B ...
Chapter Twenty Seven
You have alot of really short chapters which is good for a young teen novel. I ...
Your story line is good and is very intriguing in points. Good job. I do recom ...
You need to be careful with this chapter. You could have some copyright infring ...
Stange Garden Sculptures
General: It's a good plot line, very innept of capturing a persons attention. Pl ...